Comments - What I've Kept Inside

-v-neE- ( F C ) at 2006-02-28

O_O hehe...cHeEr uP..~ hopE u,suggesting to just befriends with him is not a bad choice..~ ^^

-v-neE- ( F C ) at 2006-02-28

OO..btw,LovE the poeM~ hehe..your're very good at writing poems..so admire yOu..~ ^^ 10/5 ^^ its toO gOod to be just fivE..~ ^^

Shane ( F P ) at 2006-02-28

A reflection of inner despair.
Sadly i've been there.
Only time may prove to tear,
that forgotten pair..

lol when I read something that I relate to well I sorta start doing that, it's a tough thing unrequited love.

I find the most difficult thing about it is missing all their imperfections when you know they are there somewhere. Turning a blind eye is simply easier.

ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-28

I can relate to this poem 100%...well i can relatre to them almost most of the time because i have gone thru what you have gone through some time in my lifetime...i just hope you r not hurting a lot because it hurts to hurt....well take care and keep writing
much love

Cuddles ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-28

WHOA!!! This poem has blown me so far away! Girl, I'm speechless. I mean, I'm trying to think of words to say and there are none, just-WHOA!!!

×ps. i love you× ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-28

O hunny!!! I know just what you're dealing with!! be strong!! I know how much that sux!!!

love always!!
~xAmandax~

AloVeLiFeHuRtS(Jayma) ( F P C ) at 2006-03-02

Omg omg omg i loved it so much it made me cry because you know i feel the same way!!!!

bharti ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-03

Wonderful.........its so touching dear.
keep it up.....5/5

Bharti

Victoria at 2006-03-03

Your poem dont suck its really good

•*l| doяα |l*• ( F C ) at 2006-03-03

Hey darl a t0uching piece uve expressed urself well keep it up

Natalie84 ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-03

The poems that you think "suck" are incredible...even if this is the simplest poem you have it's awesome...it flowed perfectly ...it seems so damn easy for you...like you don't even have to think about it at all...to achieve that is truly impressive. Nicely done!!

Oshabell at 2006-03-03

I love your poem and I know exactly what you meant because i'm going through the same thing right now!!!

belle163 at 2006-03-04

Hey is this nikki, if it is this is awesome i love it

katie at 2006-03-04

Omggg
i could totally relate to this! i read it and i was like
"ohh i remeber those days with that guy.." and how hard it was to say goodbye. well its been like a 5 months and i still L.o.v.e him..and i really dont want to
lol ok im done explaing my problems!
i

Shan ( F ) at 2006-03-04

Oh my gosh!! This is one of the BEST poems i've ever read!!! I love it!!

bharti ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-04

That was wonderful dear!
so deep and heart touching.......5/5

take care
Bharti

Kesha at 2006-03-04

Wow, it's the best. I love it.



Hurtingsoul ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-04

Hey thanx for commenting on my poem
let me say this poem does not suck none of them do very well written poems is to let emotions out
take care
HS

Ana at 2006-03-04

OMG This is great I love this poem!

Ana at 2006-03-04

I noe exactly how u feel wich is why i love this poem!


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