¸.´*`•d0rA ( F C )
Hey darl beautifully written. great j0b!!
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
Magnificent! Amazing, loving write! A divine poem Darien, truly wonderful!
Cuddles ( F P C D )
It's so cute! The whole shy guy thing kind of gets to me. It's adorable. Divinely lovely write!
As night fades into day© ( F )
I love this poem. so meaningful and just beautiful. was it based on anything you've been through? anyway it was beautiful.
Your poem is extremmmmmly great!
The Wingless ( F P C D )
This was a great poem. I really like the way it was introduced, and from there it stayed with strong rhymes and a strong poem. I'm sure whoever it's for would like it. (If it's for someone)
The rain has stopped,
as the sun peaks through.
A rainbow can be seen,
but baby I'm looking at you.
That seems to be the best ending I have ever read out of any poem so far.
Wow this is a really cute poem good job! :]
*~innocent crybaby~* ( C )
That was so sweet...whom ever this was about must be very special...great poem...
rar ( F C )
Hey this is a very good poem. i like how u write. good job
I think it is vary nice!
shobhana kumar ( F C D )
Great work, Darien!
a nice simple idea done into a great story.
good luck and peace
This is so sweet, I love it.
Oh my goodness this is amazing... i love it ♥
sayo ( C )
DANG! this is a good poem boy who ever ur girl is should be happy she got a poet has a bf and a poem thats so lovely dedicated to her :) (check out my poem love is...)
THis is really good and very sweet.
Tisha ( F P C )
AWWWW,Not only do you have a dark side you have a sweet side too.Can't beat that...lol Very sweet meaning behind this poem.
rar ( F C )
Heyy this is a cute poem. good job. i like how u write
♥Angela♥ ( F P C D )
Very sweet and precious...... young love...... great rhyme and flow. Beautifully written.
Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)
├Truely_Spoken┤ ( F P C )
I frame a picture i took with my mind! that was a great line, great conecpt = great poem
if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
- Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken
Bridgette ( F P C D )
Aw that is such a sweet poem. I loved it from beginning to end. You described everything so beautifully and I love the last line of it.. It was so sweet and absolutely adorable. You did such a great job on this! I loved it!