Reiko ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-06
I liked the idea behind the poem but you seemed to rush it. You are such a talented writer and have much potential. Try making the poem a little longer, like, stretch out some of the verse.
Daze ( C D )
at 2006-03-06
Very sweet and thoughtful, no need to improve on this poem it's very good, your agood writer, so keep writing, i gave you a 5/5.