Comments

♥ iNviSibLe 2 u ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-10

This is sweet and from the heart well done 5/5 xxALLYxx

Gwen ( P C D ) at 2008-11-07

OMG, ur poem totally describe how I feel. A really cute poem. Love it!

Mysterious Charmer ( F C ) at 2008-11-21

Your words are so simple but hold such a deep meaning and message. Your words weave a true statement indeed. Very well written poem, you speak many truths in your words. Powerful poem and beautifully written. Amazing job, i'll be reading on..

Take care,
Mysterious Charmer

MizzCici ( C ) at 2008-12-12

Aww this is real cute and understand where its coming from ive felt lie that b4 and still do alot of time...keep writting and stop by sum time and leave me a comment!

xX the left behind Xx ( F C ) at 2008-12-16

Awesome poem..
keep up the good work. :)

Crystal Rose Blooming ( F P C D ) at 2008-12-16

Very uncomplicated poem , simply easy words with great flow and nice rhyme. Waiting to read more from you

Dream Angel ( F P C D ) at 2008-12-17

Very true and very powerful words...yes, I liked it very much. Write us some more of these kind of beauties!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

noloveleft ( F P C ) at 2008-12-26

Its a good poem... i like it

Shokry ( F C ) at 2009-01-07

It's true.. 5/5

Tenchima at 2009-01-17

Alright I'm feeling this peace.
Keep up the good work.

XxSchwarz MondxXBlack MoonXx ( F C D ) at 2009-01-27

So freaken true it's sad. 5/5

ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs ( F C ) at 2009-01-30

I really liked this poem.
i think you did a great job.
It was short and simple
but it had a deep meaning.
:)

Valedico ( F P C D ) at 2009-02-04

It's good, very true poem.

Birgit ( F P C D ) at 2009-02-18

Absolutely true, every word =]
- Short comment, sorry 'bout that ^^ -
xx

Milton ( F C D ) at 2009-02-19

I thought it was nice. I know I'm late saying this, but you should try making some more. =) it's short and true. it's nice. good stuff. =)

Guy loves Girl ( F P C ) at 2009-04-14

This is a very well put poem..
o much truth with every line put down.. well put.. 5/5.. try writing more..

Fullmetal ( F C ) at 2009-06-17

Great poem. It had a clear and significant meaning. Concise and brilliant.

Deathsdarkness ( F P C D ) at 2009-06-22

This is a good poem i liked it the emotion was strong snd deep as i read it i could feel it pull me in the structure is great the rythem is smooth and ongoing

the things i think you should change are get rid of the & because i think the poem will flow better and use the word to instead of 2 it looks better and is grammaticly right you should only use it really if you are refering to a number of something

well done

HI ( F P C ) at 2009-08-20

Very well written poem.. line for line.. its filled with true meaning.. well done..

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