Comments - Keep On Living

Simon Hayes ( F C D ) at 2006-03-14

Beautiful and yet melancholy... Loved the write... So much said in so few words :)

Jay27 ( F C D ) at 2006-03-14

This is a sweet sad poem. It does feel a little rhyme heavy and rigid, but I don't think it would take a lot of work to make this a great poem.



Bill Turner ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-14

A heartfelt message and great flow. Awesome poem! I love the last stanza...it rings so true, all to often. But, find a way we must. Great job!

Luke ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-14

Good Rhymes.. and a good flow.. well done.. another great poem.. keep it up.

Luke. x

PURE HEART ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-20

So short and sweet... loved ur poem lol!

luv,
Bharti

Brittany-&-Matthew ( F C ) at 2006-03-20

I usually don't like short poems, but this was really good! Keep it up!

-Brittany

lilia ( F P C ) at 2006-03-20

That was wonderful... i loved the flow of the poem it worked very well. 5/5

Davely at 2006-03-21

Great poem umm at my school i'm doing this project where i'm supposed to put 10 poems of authors who put poems i hope i could use ur poem (don't worry i will not put it as mine)
plz send me ur reply at duvalingirl@yahoo.com
GREAT POEM holla back gurl

♥Angela♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-26

Wonderful write Laura..... although a relationship has ended and it brings forth pain this write gives the message of a very postive and hopeful outlook for the future. Keep on writing......

Eibutsina ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-11

Short but strong, direct...and somewhat intense...great poem hun keep it up :O)
PS: Thanks for your comment!
Risa

Bridgette ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-01

This is really good.. especially for such a short poem. You did a great job on this. I can definitely relate to this. Great job! 5/5*

Skry ( F C ) at 2006-05-02

Short and to the point and no less powerful for it. Emotional and evocative, beautiful 5/5 x