Illuminati ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-13
Very loving and heartfelt! Great write!
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
at 2006-03-14
Beautiful and yet melancholy... Loved the write... So much said in so few words :)
Jay27 ( F C D )
at 2006-03-14
This is a sweet sad poem. It does feel a little rhyme heavy and rigid, but I don't think it would take a lot of work to make this a great poem.
Bill Turner ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-14
A heartfelt message and great flow. Awesome poem! I love the last stanza...it rings so true, all to often. But, find a way we must. Great job!
Luke ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-14
Good Rhymes.. and a good flow.. well done.. another great poem.. keep it up.
Luke. x
PURE HEART ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-20
So short and sweet... loved ur poem lol!
luv,
Bharti
Brittany-&-Matthew ( F C )
at 2006-03-20
I usually don't like short poems, but this was really good! Keep it up!
-Brittany
lilia ( F P C )
at 2006-03-20
That was wonderful... i loved the flow of the poem it worked very well. 5/5
Davely
at 2006-03-20
Great poem umm at my school i'm doing this project where i'm supposed to put 10 poems of authors who put poems i hope i could use ur poem (don't worry i will not put it as mine)
plz send me ur reply at duvalingirl@yahoo.com
GREAT POEM holla back gurl
♥Angela♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-26
Wonderful write Laura..... although a relationship has ended and it brings forth pain this write gives the message of a very postive and hopeful outlook for the future. Keep on writing......
Eibutsina ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-10
Short but strong, direct...and somewhat intense...great poem hun keep it up :O)
PS: Thanks for your comment!
Risa
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