Mephastophilis ( F C D )
at 2006-04-25
Hey Bob- its been a long time since i read your poetry and i've forgotten intresting it was. Speaking of interesting, using a tree as a methaphor for a women is very unusual (well i've never seen a sexy tree!) but you really made it work! I loved the flow and diction- it's very sweet and romantic- i truly hope you find ur lovely fern. Take care. XxX.
Jacklyn ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-25
Great poem bob, as always. i really like the flow given to it. the first and last stanza were my favotires, good beginning and a strong ending.
~Jacklyn
Wings of flames ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-26
YEs I loved this.
Are you really 47?
Not that it matters, just wondering.
I enjoyed the imagery you used, it gave it so much more depth then your average poem.
5/5
I'm adding yu to my favourites.
~Em
Natalie84 ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-28
So what does a Mighty oak and a lovely fern create? Just curious...Lol
I loved this...it was different...lol but in a GOOD way!!! The first stanza was my absolute favorite...you're just too good at this!!! well I guess I've taken up enough space...I love the tree love!!! I NEED to experience this!!!!! :)~~~~~ Awesome write!!
Tammy ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-29
Wonderful write Bob!
Leave it to you to think of something like this..LOL
I loved it.
Take care!
Christy
at 2006-05-19
You're REALLY good @ love poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Christy
donaldrminikus ( F P C D )
at 2006-05-25
' I thought I was a mighty oak until I met a lovely fern... magic.
and the poem has great depth too.
P&q is blessed.
Don
♥Ann~Stareyes♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-05-25
Bob
Absolutely beautiful....how I've missed reading your beautiful writes....
"I thought I was a mighty oak until I met a lovely fern".....this is precious...beautiful and magical....loved it...as always. Take care.
Love Ann
Lisa ( F C D )
at 2006-05-31
I thought this was a really cracking poem Bob...beautiful description.
I love the little message you left at the end:
I thought I was a mighty oak,
until I met a lovely fern
nice one.
Rachel Barnett ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-11
Great imagery, flow and metaphor. Quite unique. Although I enjoyed the entire piece, the ending was just too cute! I do enjoy reading your work. Wonderful job!
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-04
Congrats on the readers choice :) Great poem.
I shall follow the trail
young saplings leave for me
whilst singing my verse
seduced by a tree......
I really loved the ending stanza
Take Care Cindy
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