Rebecca
at 2006-04-26
Thats so cute
Luanne ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-26
I love the style in which you've written this pieve ...starting the first stanza in each line with "once in my life"....
Many poems are unable to pull this one off but you pull it off wonderfully Steven !
You can feel the ache in your heart in the last stanza .
Wonderfully written , heart touching poem Steven !
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
at 2006-04-26
Deep, melancholy poem Steven... Your words are very heart breaking. Beautifully written piece.
PoeticXTragedy ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-26
At least you got that "once a life" experience.. ya know?
poem wise-- it was great!
жshadowspoetж ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-27
Either days or years are merely moments. Reverence remains the source of bliss. The gift of life is never more or less. marvelous penned steven, brilliant!!
Jamie ( P )
at 2006-04-30
That's amazing! You shoukd really find a coffee shop to read that at :) I especially like how the lines flow together so easily. Good job!
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Anonymous
at 2006-04-30
I am going through the same thing. 5/5
JYOTI RANA ( F P C )
at 2006-05-01
IT IS NICE POEM I LIKE IT AS LOVE HAPPEN ONLY ONCE.
Kestin
at 2006-05-01
This peice shows depth and it really shows your intrest in poetry i love your wording and i also think that the examples eg when you said=Once in my life I felt so free,
free as the cool wind that stirs the trees
Ashley ( P C )
at 2006-05-01
This is a really nice poem. Beautifully written, I could really relate to the 5th stanza. Great job!!
♥ ღ forgotten ღ ♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-05-02
Wow i really like this... ur such a great writter i love the last paragraph
David ( F C )
at 2006-05-02
Thats a beautiful poem.. well done, good Job, it was very meaningful, you should be very pleased with this.
dave
April
at 2006-05-02
Nice-it has emotion- u can tell u put ur true feelings into it
its awesome like u understand true love
ani
at 2006-05-03
Im in aww with this poem i had to take a moment and take everything in....i mean woow. a real 5/5 keep it up
Tiffaney
at 2006-05-03
What a lovely Poem It is really good and it hink you should keep up the good work. You can tell that you have put a lot of feelings into the words that you have written.
donaldrminikus ( F P C D )
at 2006-05-05
Yes....Hope.
That one time feeling that makes it all worth while.
I felt it (again)
And , thanks for visiting me.
Lisa ( F C D )
at 2006-05-08
Awww such a sad poem Steven....many people can really relate to your words.....super job.
take care, lise
† Vladimira Rose Styx † ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-15
Fantastic poem, a lovely read. 5 from me, and again, brilliantly done.
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