Elisa ( F C )
at 2006-06-25
Wow. the is truly amazing. you have a way with words. and its touching
Kailey
at 2006-06-25
This is a m a z i n g .
"aLoVeLiFeHuRtS" ( F P C )
at 2006-06-26
You know i feel the same man it hurts great poem!!!
Cuddles ( F P C D )
at 2006-06-26
Absolutely incredible! It's like you see right through me. Your work always amazes me. Awesome job!
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
at 2006-06-26
Blam... What a superb little piece. The flow is simply precise. The rhymes are perfectly suited. The overall emotions of the poem are familiar to a lot of people, but you've made it seem all that more unique. A very enjoyable read.
*Chelsey-Lynn* ( F P C D )
at 2006-06-26
Tiny D....I wish you could see the tears flowing right now!!...I know this isn't a poem you'd cry to, but I'm bawling...I've never been in love, but my best friend meant more to me then anyone and I'm going through exactly what you said...I am trying and trying and trying so HARD to just let her go, I keep telling myself a true friend wouldn't treat you how she does and all but its so hard...the first stanza already had me in tears because when I hear her name its just like..heartbreaking because I know things are falling to pieces...A poem I really could relate too..I hope everythings alright with you and best of luck with the fellas..you'll find someone!
Chelsey-Lynn
Pauly D. ( P C )
at 2006-07-01
Wow. This is exquisitely sad...perfect, absolutely brilliant rythym...awesome poem. So sad, though...
__meLanChoLy__ ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-01
Omg .. this poem almost made me cry .. my bf just broke up with me ='( ..and .. oh .. nvm .. i love this one ..
§äяаћ ღ ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-01
GOD DAMN...BEAUTIFUL. I can't even explain my relevance to this poem. I love it. LOVE ITTT! It must be my favorite. WOWW...i'm just stunned. Perfect, perfect, flawless work! 5/5
Gary Jurechka ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-16
I feel your pain, your longing, your loss.Sometimes hope is another word for desperation.Believe me, I've been there.I have a whole theory/philosophy of how we lie to ourselves to be happy, this taps into that a bit.It is so hard to let go.Acceptance is one of the hardest things in the world.I know, I know how this feels.If you ever want to talk...well, I understand.But don't ever give up on the love inside you, the ability to feel, to dream, to hope, to be alive, know you will love again....It's all up to you.
Take care,
Gary
Sarah ( C )
at 2006-07-17
Gosh...this was truly AmAzInG. I have never seen a poem so perfectly written...it flowed so easily...every stanza just fit together. You have raw talent...there's no other explanation. 5/5 for sure!!
TAKE CARE-stargazer38
She ( F D )
at 2006-08-03
Wow....this poem is too perfect for words. You are so amazing at writing. never change...ever. she
~in my eyes~ ( F P C )
at 2006-08-22
Awwwwwwwww how good of course id say that just like all the other ones but i really like how you write well i felt like that before but somehow i moved on bearly this year and you know everytime i see him i get this big grin on my face but i just got to let it go............ i know that was boring why would you want to know..... i dont know why you would want to but i put it there anyways well this is to much i know so ill go now buh bye
¤~♥ღintRepId_but_hoPeLess ( F D )
at 2006-08-25
Yeah... Agree... I hate this old feeling inside... It just makes me crazy... Great basis...
latino babe ( F P )
at 2006-09-06
This is awesome, i can relate to you alot!!! I love your style of writing I hope you chel out mine n tell me what ya think. take care xoxoxoxox
ღNemOღ ( F C D )
at 2006-09-06
I don't regret reading your poems!
every poem that I've read till now has something to do with me!
This Probably means something to me...since I've been hurt once or even two..hehe, not too much?? =P
anyway..I like the idea of the poem...I love those authors who try to be sorta unique...this is what I always try to do also...creative ideas, Captivating titles!
your poems are very inspiring..very beautiful,..comparing to your young age =)
I hvn't got much words to say but you really hv made my day with reading your poems..it was a pleasure, Thanx =)
Best Of Luck
NemO xxxxxxxxxxx
Diana J. Armenta
at 2006-12-30
Amazing poem...i once felt like this...nice job
DESIREE
at 2007-06-24
Wow i love that peom bc thats how i feel and i understand you.... you did a really good job.
Tiffany ( C )
at 2007-06-24
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH THIS POEM HIT HOME FOR ME.....LOL THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I'M FEELING AT THE MOMENT!!! GREAT JOB...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
dreamer3
at 2007-06-29
Oh wow!
awesome poem
exactly how i feel at this moment =/
really helped me when i read it thanx! =)
keep up the great work...U HAVE TALENT!!
=)
<3
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