johnnys_princess ( F C D )
at 2006-07-03
Wow excellent poem you painted such a wonderful picture very descriptive with great choice of words rhymed and flowed well 5/5
Cayce Lee ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-03
Wow.. amazing. Great use of words. The descriptions were so vivid. It flowed very well. The rhymes were very good.
"Your whispers caressed my drowsy ears
as you kiss upon my neck and cheek
Soft hands embraced my body tightly
Then my eyes and knees grow weak"
^^That was my favorite stanza! Great job!
Arcane Blondie ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-03
Wow that was so well written that the whole setting of the poem calmed me down--This is perfect. I dont have anything that you could change to make it better--Amazing imagery and flow--Beautifully written! 5/5
loretta Taylor ( F P C )
at 2006-07-04
Very nice. I liked it alot
Laura ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-05
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
This was an amazing write. The imagery created is sensual and I felt like I was reliving a past experience of my own! You know youhave talent when you can evoke that kind of emotion from a reader!! Excellent write!! 5/5
Pauline
at 2006-09-11
I liked the imagery a lot. it was really pretty. it could have used more punctuation, though.
i loved the idea that came across as i read it, it was lovely!
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