Princess Love ( F P C )
at 2006-07-06
Oh wow, this one is just awesome. I loved it... from the first line to the last. Its so full of love and appreciation, just mindblowing. You are one of the best writers on this site, so keep them coming.
Best Wishes
Michelle
- ×·.d0ra ; ( F C )
at 2006-07-07
Hey darl a very heartelt write. i loved the way u structured it. very touching keep it up xx
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-09
"When two hearts merge... it's wonderful love."
I not only loved the way you wrote this, I loved the message as well. I'm glad for you, my friend. Very well done. Billy Rob
stormy ( F C D )
at 2006-07-10
Such a true, beautiful write Bert. When true love is found..what a feeling.
Before you, there was only just one dream,
Ever longing for, always missed, and never believed.
I love those lines. Very well done my friend. Love the title also.
Best Wishes..
Peace and Love~
Sourav ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-10
Hi there! This is really a wonderfull poem you've written... I liked each and every line of it... It's a real good poem!
BLACK CAT 7 ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-10
Very wonderful..i liked ur poem so much..evry word u wrote ws so fantasic.., the way..the flow and the rhyme..great work..u deserve 1000000000/5...wish u all the best..
├Truely_Spoken┤ ( F P C )
at 2006-07-12
Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)
♥Stephanie♥ ( F P C )
at 2006-07-13
I really like this poem,It's very well written, please check out my poems, thanks!
Mustardhart ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-09
I love this one, tis beautiful and wholistic. Gr8 job keep it up man
donaldrminikus ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-12
"when two hearts murge"...love , what else. This is another Bert beautiful poem again.
Don
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-12
I really liked the style of this poem different and refreshing. Also beautiful words and emotions.
Robie ( F C D )
at 2006-09-14
I love the style of your poem! this is another beuitifull poem! donno what to say!
Flaminia
at 2006-10-18
Quite a good poem,may be a little obvious.I'm saying this because I've just read father's love and...There's no camparison between the two!!!That's why I won't vote this one,because giving that a 5 I would have to give this a three and your average would get lower.The poem flows well and you've got a good writing technique.The theme is though seen too many times.Try something new...You can do it...excellent writer!
~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~ ( F P C D )
at 2008-10-22
Cute poem! i like it! =)
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