жshadowspoetж ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-12
It's beautiful penned mr bob, i liked the last line and mostly you've done here....still remember what i've told you before, maybe not.....
to be loved is to know sorrow
a leprechaun's wish for rain
but the gold is always lost
when the clouds reappear
poverty is welcomed.........
and i want you to know i liked how you expressed them, i thought you're leave...well, welcome genius men...have a great day! take care.
bert.
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-23
I love the title Enslaved, we are all enslaved to our past and what it left deep inside us, you are a wonderful poet neighbor.
Lovely Bones ( F C D )
at 2006-08-27
I like this stanza the best:
"shackled is my heart
with gut wrenching emotion
never wanting such fear
nor understanding why
wisdom can be a curse"
Dripping with thought and emotion, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's so flavorful and you seem to be passionate about this topic. Great job.
Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy
broken_reflection ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-02
Your an amazing poet, I really enjoy reading your work... keep it up 5/5 from me
mistressxsork ( F C D )
at 2006-11-09
Wow.. that was fantastic. The flow and depth.. nicely done. 4.7/5
karl wild ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-07
Wow this is another amazing poem,I love your choice of words in your poems, that makes a huge difference 5/5 I was wondering if u could read some of my stuff and give me your opinions on it im fairly new to poetry and this site and your quite experienced anyway thanks
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-09
Excellent poem.
A soul that begs to be held
yet the mind says beware
This is so moving. You have a great talent. Love to read your poems.
IceGoddess Morgana ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-17
A great poem that I really loved =)
Rhea
Somber Esprit ( C D )
at 2007-09-07
Another great poem! loved:
"shackled is my heart
with gut wrenching emotion"
i can relate! you captured that feeling really well. same goes for :
"a soul that begs to be held
yet the mind says beware"
so true!! really beautiful poem. great work.
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