goran ( F P C D )
My new poem to all of you
mera naya shaer, saab kele
hunraway nwem, bo hamutan
desigirl ( F C D )
Oh, I can not write anything this time, because I think writing some like "great poem" or "well written" is not enough for this poem, I feel every line of this poem and I feel like reading it over and over.
I always thought you are the greatest person I ever read, But after reading this one, I am wordless. I wish you were here in this heart so you would know what this poem means to me.
you know after a guy broke my heart I just could not write anything for a while, because that is how I felt. Am I liying to my self?
but again great job on the last line, IT WAS YOU WHO SET MY HEART ON FIRE.
Great job Goran, I wish i could steal those words from you.
Sorry If I am over reacting but no one knows how I felt after reading it.
Tara-Kay ( F P C D )
I thought it was really good, it was a bit rocky at first but being a short poem it really was awesome
TaperedDreams ( F P C D )
This is a really good poem. It had a different kind of idea to it, and i liked it. I'm sure alot of people can relate to this poem. Great work.
sweetcherries09 ( F P C D )
For a short poem it was great!! To the point and still had lots of emotion in it!!! good job!!!
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
A very unique and passionate love poem
>black&&blue ( F P C D )
I love it. The only thing you need to fix is the word "lier". Isn't it spelled "liar". If you are right, I am sorry. It's not a big deal anyways. :)
It was short but to the point. Good job.
freshta ( C )
i know you like the smile, but i told you don't lie to your poor pain.
you lied to me too, "she is the best"
now get it then,lol
No honestly a nice poem like always i like the way you come up with those ideas. You are a true poet.
freshta ( C )
I meant PEN
Melissa S. Masucci ( F P C D )
Wow this is fantastic. I love the uncharacteristic tone/message in this. It really makes you think. :)
Nelle ( F P C D )
For it being so short it sure did have a lot of power in it! it was great
-»FάĐэđ © ( C D )
A pretty simple poem, which I thought could have added some more to it. But, I did like it the way it is, and you did get straight to the point. Great job! 5/5
libby ( F P C D )
Oooh, this one I love. I think it's the concept that really got me, it's a cute way to think about things. I like the little rhyme at the end especially, really clinches things.
O.o°•тσямєηтє∂•° ( F C D )
This is such a good poem! not good AMAZING i cant even begin to describe how gd this poem is!! AWESOME MAN!! too gd...i can sooo totally relate to it.. this guy doesnt like my poems either n he doesnt believe in my love...but anywho we was on your poem!! yeh this poem is turly AMAZING believe me!! this probably one of ma favs now!!5/5!lol
KEEP WRITING n TAKE CARE
xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D )
Awww this is cute, yet I didn't fully get it. =| It was perhaps too short and didn't flow to well..
Lesbian ( F C D )
It was short,,, straight to the point,,, and awsome :D
рортаят™ ( F P C D )
Short and sweet. Loved it. Very well written. Anmd ever though it was short it flowed really well. :)
Kisses all around(AnnMarie) ( F C D )
Once again, ify flow! It takes away your attention when the lines are long and short......
MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS ( F P C D )
Hmmm..interesting poem. Very new topic, cool idea;) Good poem=D. I liked it. but the flow was a bit off and i just couldn't catch it.
lღ Ti penso sempre ღl ( F P C D )
Great poem. Short but simple with wonderful words. As usual, an awesome and effective write. xxx