Comments - To See Your Beautiful Smile

goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

Here we go my another love poem with the hope that everyone will like it.......................

*wishing you would save me* ( F C ) at 2006-08-03

Well i like it but i know that im not everyone so i dont know if my opinion matters....but ill give it anyways ITS REALLY GOOD! lol i love it! its so cute and believable* too so that makes it even better love it!

Briana Coulter ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

This poem is so sweet. It's beautiful. I love it. 5/5

ocean at 2006-08-03

Very good its really sweet

farah ( F P C ) at 2006-08-03

Like always and as usual a great poem by a great and a favourite poet of all. this time unfortunatly i don't have anything to say..i mean to criticize ur poem..its a poem with no falls in my opinion..i love how u wrote

To see your beautiful smile,
I will change my own way.
I will break the chain of values,
No matter what the world say.

its one of my favorite lines..espically "chain of values"..thats a big step...by the way is this a true story..lool
like everyone says u seemed to write sad poem but a wonder how u turned to this...its a huge change.

who ever she is she is the most lucky person on this planet to have ur love and respect..to have u and break the chain of value just for her..
keep the great job up..iam looking forward to more..


goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

First of all , congrates on ur award FAVORITE MEMBER\\\'s award. you are truly my favorite member.

thank you for the nice comment, but yet I don\\\'t know if it is a true story or not........


desigirl ( F C D ) at 2006-08-03

I am so confused,
what you talking about???
I got lost
why thousand miles?
what beautiful smile?


the reason I am asking you this question I remember you told me your poems are all a true story and you wrote them for one person
but here you are making me confuse.
so if you have to write me please do so cause i want to know.....
lol
but a nice poem I give you that.

Jasmyn ( F P C ) at 2006-08-03

This was good

Jasmyn ( F P C ) at 2006-08-03

This was good

xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

Aww cute.. but a bit too short. I felt you could have said more... Nonetheless it was written well.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Bloomed Rose ( F C D ) at 2006-08-03

I luved it, short and sweet. Good job. thanx for reading my poem!

Bloomed Rose

Jordan (TheMisanthrope) ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

I like how sweet of a guy you are, writing a love poem such as this.

This one didn't really catch my breath. I found that it was just a stock-pile of the everyday things that a true, loving male would say to his love.

shela ( F C ) at 2006-08-03

Such a great poem by a great poet.
It is so touchy. And I hope you always see the beautiful smile.
great job
great poem
great feelings
great emotions
great words

рортаят™ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

Awh I love this poem. It's really sweet, great wording choices. Keep up the beautiful work.

Kisses all around(AnnMarie) ( F C D ) at 2006-08-04

Excellent poem, though I think that the poem should have went on longer, I think it just needed more emotion. MORE, MORE MORE MORE, I,I,I,I,I,I............ :p

GREAT WRITE,
AnnMarie

TaperedDreams ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-04

Aww, this was very beautiful, but it was so short, and it left me wanting more, maybe you should add a little more to it? Anyways, this was a very well written poem, great work.

--Steph

UnToLd TrUtH ( F C D ) at 2006-08-05

Wow this is really good!



Jordan (TheMisanthrope) ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-05

Oh, I overlooked something.

On the last line, shouldn't it be something along the lines of "No matter what the world MAY say" as opposed to "No matter what the world say"?

Just checking.

Driver ( F P C ) at 2006-08-05

Great poem. shows a lot of sincerity and care. nice choice of words also. 5/5
Driver

O.o°•тσямєηтє∂•° ( F C D ) at 2006-08-05

Hey!
Nice poem! i liked the choice of words you choosed...it had great emotion and feelings in it!! it flowed very well together!! Very well written indeed!



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