Comments - My Fairytale's Illusion

*♥CheLL- BeLL♥* ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-23

I guess it doesn't help listening to a sad song while reading this, I'm crying over here Tiny D....Those last lines are just...heart breaking for me to read.....I'm so sorry this happened to you hun...thats like the worst feeling to go through! I want you to know though, don't let one bad egg spoil it for you. Don't allow him to ruin your thinking of a dream come true..Your still young how do you know this one was your dream? Don't give up girl, Fairy Tales might not be real all the time, but dreams, oh a dream can get you so far....Loved this poem! Feel better!
Chell

Chantelle ( F P C ) at 2006-08-24

Aww hun this poem is extremely sad, i really hope your ok, im here if you need me, ever. The poem flowed very well tho. Luv ya hun xx

Cuddles ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-24

And you still have some touching up to do? That amazes me. Maybe I'm partially biased since I've loved your poems since the beginning, but I honestly don't see where anything needs to be changed. It's so bittersweet, though it is my firm belief that dreams really do come true-when it's the right one. I always feel as if you know me. Your poems are me. As always, truly incredible.

Blerina at 2006-08-24

Ahhhhh i could read this 4everr!!! even if it brings tears 2 ma eyes. Its funny how wrds makes u imagine dat wat happend 2 u felt like it happend 2 me whilst readin it....

Blerina at 2006-08-24

Ahhhhh i could read this 4everr!!! even if it brings tears 2 ma eyes. Its funny how wrds makes u imagine dat wat happend 2 u felt like it happend 2 me whilst readin it....

~if only he knew~ ( F P C ) at 2006-08-24

And you say you need to touch it up girl you aint got to touch up nothing it is good the way it is

"aLoVeLiFeHuRtS"(Jayma ( F P C ) at 2006-08-25

Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved it so much man its been so long you know i needed to here your poems keep them comming girl you know this is how i feel!!

lღ Ti penso sempre ღl ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-27

Awwwwwzz!! This is so beautiful!!! Wonderful poem I love it!! The story was a broken fairy tale and I pictured every detail in my mind. Gorgeous poem on all ends, no wonder you're on my favorites. keep it up!!! xxx

Tabi kat at 2006-08-29

I love ALL OF YOUR POEMS EVEN IF U THINK THEY ARE BAD I STILL LIKE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!

Denys Dattilio at 2006-08-30

Wow you like steal the words from my mouth...its crazy lol...you are very good and totally made me cry cuz i really relate sadly it makes me feel better to know someone feels the same...so i guess im trying to say thanks! =)

Emily ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-30

Wow.... thats all i can say. I could imagine every word of this poem as it came.. terrific job on your part. And by the way, you dont need to fix it up, its already one of my favorites Ive read so far! 5/5 Keep writing and take care..
*Emily*

Lovely Bones ( F C D ) at 2006-08-30

That is a very sad and good way to describe a break up.. or whatever may have happened. I truly hope that everything is ok now. Great poem, keep it up!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

♥Megan♥ at 2006-09-04

Very good poem. Nice flow. Great job! Keep it up! 5/5. ~Megan~

Shannon Loter ( F P C ) at 2007-08-18

AMAZING

FinalXBreathX ( F P C ) at 2008-03-27

Wow This poem is just...wow...I am utterly speechless. You write so well it's hard to believe.

Tiana at 2008-10-13

Awwww, this is gonna make me cry!
i'm so sorry for whatever happened to you that happened. i know where you were at, i'm here now.
you are an amazing poet, no doubt.

5/5

-Tiana

tainted melody ( F P C D ) at 2011-12-18

Another awesome write. You really are very talented :)

kavitha jesson at 2013-03-25

Love ur poems...

elizabeth at 2013-06-04

This i think is the best poem i have ever read

LushPlush at 2013-06-09

I love your poem. I look around at my family and I see that there's only a few happy endings. I've come to realize that fairy tales are just that. They are make believe. Telling the little girls that you can fall in-love in an instant and live happily ever after. When in the real world you don't.


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