-] ñØ òÑé [- ( F P )
I think the word "poet" is used too many times but that's being critical I suppose. Overall - I like the vibe I got from this poem and it tells a beautiful story. 5/5
ReBecca ( F P C D )
How beautiful. I ususally dont read love poems, but this was referred as a great poem, so I read it and was touched. Great job, easy to read, nice flow.
amanda ( F P )
Laura ( F P C D )
Your penned words are original and simple yet at the same time very profound. This poem almost brought a tear to my eye. You painted a sad yet beautifdul picture of an undying love between 2 souls. I loved it so much I had to read it twice!!! Such a pleasure to read!
Cuddles ( F P C D )
WOW!! I wish to say more, but you'll have to wait until my mind can function again. This is completely stunning.
Sondos ( F P C D )
That was out of this world!
So incredibly written. I have no critiscim ooh it was a sumptuous read !
jessel jane ( P )
How did you do it?I mean... wow,how in the world it touched me much... really,two thumbs up!!
ღNemOღ ( F C D )
Awwwww, this is absolutely TERRIFIC~!!!!
I LOVE this poem so much...the idea was very Captivating and the title aswell!
I'm glad you could write poems in a VERY poetic way...this is what poetry looks like..
this poem has so many beautiful meanings...outstanding, beautiful Ryhme, very breathtaking =)
Poets like you ain't easy to find...very great job honey keep it up
Thanks for your Inspiration
Best Of Luck
victoria ( F C )
WOW..that is very deep,wow...i dont have any words to express that.wow...well keep on writing and inspirering.
-*`d0ra ( F C )
That was s0 beautiful!! great j0b darl. very well written!! l0ved it =] xx
LOVE IT OH SO VERY MUCH!!!
I totally relate to this poem alot...
Write more okayys...
I really enjoy it loads...
It really touches the heart...
Deana ( F P C D )
This is so beautiful and enchanting , the words feel like they belong to a different time period,an era of romance and undying love, you know the kind we all want!
goran ( F P C D )
Another great poem by you, you are a very talented poet with great feelings and words. i really enjoy your poetry.
♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥© ( F P C D )
It Should Be a Sin To Write This Good, I'm Officialy Jealous lol 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
Marcus ( F C D )
You are an awesome poet...you keep your poems long yet the excellence is consitent throughout the whole poem
RainbowSlider ( F P C D )
Wow, that was really something.
FlirtingWithDeath ( F P C D )
My gosh this poem took my breath away. You seem to be doing that alot with me with your poetry. Wonderful job 5/5
Minkus ( F P C D )
This poem was masterfully crafted; it very well described the truth that writing the words are often much easier than saying them. The rhythm was almost flawless and the rhymes were new and refreshing. 5/5.
Vanessa Lea ( F C )
This poem is so long! Yet you have managed to keep each and every verse interesting and beautiful.
Great work 5/5
Letty.... ( F P C D )
Another masterpiece written by a very talented poet. I love this poem. It is extremely beautiful. I love your poems. You leave me speechless most of the time. lol. Keep up the wonderful work hun! 5/5
It deserves much. much more....