misstress ( F C D )
You know how to put your emotions unto writing..
Beautiful poem....i love the words.....hope you have more coming
Luna ( F P C D )
Very nice. I love how there is a story behind it, and "real life" sort of feeling. Something that could happen and/or has happened to everyone.
Jpoet ( F P C D )
Nice job...rhyme scheme was a little off, but overall i really enjoyed this poem. your a fav. of mine! Jpoet*
-*`d0ra ( F C )
Beautifully written darl very well d0ne. keep it up xx
jessel jane ( P )
Im totally speechless! What a nice poem to read... soothing...comforting... touching in a way one can never forget it's existence.Great job!
Marcus ( F C D )
I liked it nice flow...alot of emotion put into it great job
LuvSuxGetDrunk ( F P C D )
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
A very passinate love poem that anyone in love can relate to
Deana ( F P C D )
Beautiful poem, very romantic, sounds like it wasworth waiting for!
Brooke Amity ( C )
I LOVE this poem.
everyone has felt this way and you put into words so perfectly.
Ashley Paul ( F P C D )
Beautiful...just beautiful...keep it up. I could see it clearly happening in my head and it was so calming. I loved it.
This really captures the moment, in the most easiest way. It's great! :]
Tara-Kay ( F C D )
This poem was really really beautiful, it shows the love you share with someone, it shows the confusing of feelings, and it was absolutely awesome!
Oh my god i love your poem its amazing..its just soo touching in everyway its unbelievable
♥shyann♥ ( F P C )
Very beautiful poem:)...keep up the good work your doing great!!5/5
~*Weeping Wolf*~ ( F P C )
Amazing. I felt the very same way when i first fell in love. it is a beautiful thing. We all pray these things last...and hopefully they all will.
Lynzie ( P )
So sweet and really petty too 5/5
JessicaK Loves JeffreyL Forever ( F C )
Wow. . .that is a nice poem. . .I love it. . .Keep up the work. . .I LOVE THIS