toomuch ( F C )
at 2006-10-02
Its always the best to make ur own decision, just dont regret it, good job! hehehe
Alexis
at 2006-10-02
This is really really good I look forward to reading more of your poems
Purple ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-02
Great job. The lines were long, and because I already have a tiny bit of a head ache that caused me a tiny bit of a problem. Besides that, and a bump in the second to last stanza where the double use of again once again tripped me up a little, you did a practicly flawless job.
A poem of strength, moving on, and hope for the future... Great job.
Thanks for commenting on my poem, I really wanted some one to comment that one, and I usually don't care.
~Purple~
Mystic Enchantress ( F P )
at 2006-11-19
I really like this poem. There are times in life when some of us change or the best. Yes we don't stay where we do not belong. I have written one like this. keep up the great job!
**heartbroken**
at 2007-01-31
I love this girl every one lol
jess i love your poems!!!!!! u explain exactly how i feel lol
and omg ur bak well i havnt been on for a while aye
love you heaps my beautiful girly
nazzy keep ur chin up and smile!!!
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