Comments

d4tGurL ( P ) at 2006-11-04

Why is it so hard to let go? i too do not know and can relate. letting go is so much easier then holding on...and yet impossible to do...nicely written :)

Vonnie McHugh ( F P C ) at 2006-11-04

This very beautiful thank you

Laura ( F C ) at 2006-11-16

This poem is very well written and very understandable my friends have been stuck in these situations and theyve come to me for help.....

Tammi ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-06

Wow so true it is so hard to let go of someone you love so much I am going through it myself right now and as you said even on my death bed I will never let it go great line love it you are very talented kepp it up 5/5

Dark_Vampire_chick ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-09

Aww.....that was so cool...i havetn been able to write a poem about rose and this was was so cool.."the rose you gave me long ago
i hold onto it still
a love that was lost long ago
a love for which i'd kill"
this part was my fav..its awesome! keep it up! ur a great poet!

j ( C ) at 2006-12-09

Deep....and good

Brittney Schmelter ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-13

B-e-a-utiful. The only thing I think you could fix is:

-Capitalize every letter in the beginning of each rhyme.

-One stanza didn't flow correctly:

i know i'll never let it go
this rose composed of blood
the more and more i miss you
means the deeper the thorns go

Maybe put:

This rose composed of blood.
I know I'll never let it go,
The more and more I miss you,
Means the deeper the thorns go.

I know that go's rhyme twice, but it rhymes.

Other than that, I LOVED IT! You really have a nack for writing poetry. Your rhyming was amazing. Great Job!

5/5

Anonymous Angel ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-23

Hey,
beautiful i have no other words for it, its very sweet and the flow is great (as usely)
you really have talent;)
kisses stephanie

RaZaN ( F C D ) at 2007-05-01

Nice Poem ..
Full of Emotions ...
I loved the rhyming .. It was good ..
Also the flow was good too ..
Keep it Up!
5/5 ..

Take Care,
~RoZe~