Comments - A Promise

David Munoz ( F P C D ) at 2004-03-20

I am still new at this, so any comments could really help. Thanks in advance.

kaysha ( F C ) at 2004-03-20

THis poem was very very cute. Great job and pleae keep writing :o)

JodieWatts ( F P C ) at 2004-03-21

it was ok maybe it shopuld of been longer but still good

Rachel ( F C ) at 2004-03-21

it was alright. but i did enjoy reading it!
keep writing those poems you write so well! Thanx.

hana ( F ) at 2004-03-22

i wish i could find my true love xxxxgd poem

Kee at 2004-03-22

Hi! You wrote a very beautiful poem. Viviana is a lucky girl to have you. Don't ever be afraid to show or express the greatness of your love. Keep up the great work!!!

krissy at 2004-03-22

Its a little short......i dunno, not my kinda poem.....but great rhymning....i love the first stanza!!


july at 2004-03-24

hey am here in class with two of my friends n we think you're poem is the most preciouse thing ever keep writing we love it

july at 2004-03-24

hey am here in class with two of my friends n we think you're poem is the most preciouse thing ever keep writing we love it

Kristina at 2004-04-01

I love your poem. I feel the exact same way about my boyfriend....i almost started crying when i was reading it you got a great talent keep it up...Kristina

LonelyGirl xx ( C D ) at 2004-05-24

hey great poem, i really liked it,
jemma xxx

Amy ( F P C ) at 2004-09-19

Awww!! I love this poem too!! This is so terrific and sweet!!! Great job on it!!

Amy

Untouchable_Angel ( F C ) at 2005-01-13

i liek this poem sooooooo much it is AWSOME

Khanyisile Cele at 2007-10-12

Short and sweet

shymoon at 2008-06-23

It really good i like it and i hope u keep going with this and with the situation coz it is pretty cool zeinab the shymoon

shymoon at 2008-06-23

It really good i like it and i hope u keep going with this and with the situation coz it is pretty cool zeinab the shymoon