David Munoz ( F P C D )
at 2004-03-20
I am still new at this, so any comments could really help. Thanks in advance.
JodieWatts ( F P C )
at 2004-03-21
it was ok maybe it shopuld of been longer but still good
Rachel ( F C )
at 2004-03-21
it was alright. but i did enjoy reading it!
keep writing those poems you write so well! Thanx.
Kee
at 2004-03-22
Hi! You wrote a very beautiful poem. Viviana is a lucky girl to have you. Don't ever be afraid to show or express the greatness of your love. Keep up the great work!!!
krissy
at 2004-03-22
Its a little short......i dunno, not my kinda poem.....but great rhymning....i love the first stanza!!
july
at 2004-03-24
hey am here in class with two of my friends n we think you're poem is the most preciouse thing ever keep writing we love it
july
at 2004-03-24
hey am here in class with two of my friends n we think you're poem is the most preciouse thing ever keep writing we love it
Kristina ( C )
at 2004-04-01
I love your poem. I feel the exact same way about my boyfriend....i almost started crying when i was reading it you got a great talent keep it up...Kristina
LonelyGirl xx ( C D )
at 2004-05-24
hey great poem, i really liked it,
jemma xxx
Amy ( F P C )
at 2004-09-18
Awww!! I love this poem too!! This is so terrific and sweet!!! Great job on it!!
Amy
Untouchable_Angel ( F C )
at 2005-01-13
i liek this poem sooooooo much it is AWSOME
Khanyisile Cele
at 2007-10-12
Short and sweet
shymoon
at 2008-06-23
It really good i like it and i hope u keep going with this and with the situation coz it is pretty cool zeinab the shymoon
shymoon
at 2008-06-23
It really good i like it and i hope u keep going with this and with the situation coz it is pretty cool zeinab the shymoon
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