{Baby}blue{Eyes} ( F )
at 2006-11-17
Omg wow that was probaly one of the best ones i have read on here in a long time i love it!!!!!
daretolive
at 2006-11-17
It's a great peoms, really got me lol it's so sad:(. Anyways, keep up the great poems.
&&_Dare_*To_[Dream]
hugs~not~drugs ( F C )
at 2006-11-17
Hey so that was outstanding! good job.. its so true when you just try to move on it doesnt help you have to move on together that makes it easier.. well good job keep it up
cuca ( P )
at 2006-11-18
This is a ver wonderful poem..doesnt compare to any of mine..i love it good job..i can really relate to it
Wishing you were mine... ( F P C )
at 2006-12-12
This poem is amazing. i can totally relate to it too, i was just going through something so similar to this, and it really does suck 5/5
Sara
at 2006-12-31
Wow... some friends of mine and i have all been losing what we thought were to be the ones, and our significant others and us keeping talking about it just being bad timing and that we'll get back together soon, but your poem has inspired me to just let go and have patience in knowning that something that is better and more right will come along. this is truely an amazing poem. kudos to you!
dariela
at 2007-01-11
SPEECHLESS
i have never read anything like dis
i love diz poem, it almost made me tear...in a good way :D
5/5
Viola ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-13
Awww i totally love this poem. i just ended a relationship and it really hurt. we didn't talk for a while but just recently i started talking to him again...again this poem is soooo great and i can relate to it. good job!
StoryOfMyLife ( F )
at 2007-01-16
This poem is brilliant I can so relate to it i just left someone so dear to me and i know i'll never see .him again hurts again brilliant..
Summer
at 2007-01-21
This is completly amazing i love it.
*Lina* ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-04
This poems soo good! I love all of yours, they have alot of emotion. can you please comment on mine :) xo
*No~More~Time*
at 2007-02-09
Um. i just wanted to say, that this poem is absolutely amazing. it is exactly what i've been feeling for the last couple weeks. you did a really good job.
UnKnown
at 2007-02-12
I loved this!! :)
sharon
at 2007-02-17
Heyyy omg tat was rely good....and so sad!! but i'm glad u got through it!!
Loveless Nights ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-24
Omg.. absolutely beautiful! I can't get over it, this is one of the BEST poems I have ever read!! Awesome work Heather, I didn't want the story to end.. I wanted it to go on and on and find out more. And I absolutely love the
"I once heard a story straight from the heart
About a girl and how her world began to fall apart
It all started when she met the boy that made her life complete
Just thinking of him made her heart skip a beat"
part, so beautiful.. I love your choice of words and how you made such a long poem rhyme at the end of every line. PLEASE keep up the good work!! I so look forward to seeing a lot of your other awesome creations!!! 9999999999999/5 <3 <3 <3 <3
~Loveless Nights~
[†]..[Tony]..[†] ( F P C )
at 2007-04-25
Fantastic i havnt read a poem like tht in years u r a gr8 talent ans shud b proud
Tiffany ( C )
at 2007-04-26
This was very deep...and even more intriguing since it was from real life experience!
kati
at 2007-04-26
Oh wow...this poem made me cry:'(!...this really relates to my life!...and it's truely the best poem I've ever read in! .. good job! keep up the good work!:)...
nuvia rios ( C )
at 2007-04-27
Wow this is exactly what im going through ........it hurts so profound ....abd meh......thanx in a way this poem made me feel better
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