Yu Chung Lee ( C )
at 2006-11-18
I love it~ ^-^
CharismaticCountryGirl ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-18
This poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed reading every bit of it. I think that the whole thing was amazing and so I cannot pick a favorite part. Great job!
Charisma*
Anna Stephens ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-18
I think it soooo bizarre that we both wrote the essentially the same poem on the same night. How very weird! But then, I guess, sorrow and loneliness are the universal poet's fuel.lol
Beautifully done. 5/5
Blessings
Anna
Bethan ( F P C )
at 2006-11-18
A beautiful poem, I absolutely loved it. Full of emotion and a real sense of loss but not despair, instead a strong feeling of rememberance overides it resulting in a beautifully touching piece. xxx
©ScreamingOutLoud® ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-18
Hey Bert. How are you? I've missed your amazing works and comments. This is beautiful. So simple and elegant, as always. I know how you feel here and I hope that feeling lasts!!
xDanikax
Take Care
xxoxoxx
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-18
Your poems always have such elegance and sweet romantic images, beautiful!
donaldrminikus ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-18
Just another beautiful poem. I'll never tire from. was happy to see another bert.
Have a nice day.
Don
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-18
What a lovely piece. I love the style you used here. It was beautifully sad. Very well done. Billy Rob
Darien ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-19
Very nice imagery with the ships. A well used metaphor. You really have some splendid love poems. You have written better ones than this, but each poem holds a different meaning for the poet, and that is still something beautiful.
Vonnie McHugh ( F P C )
at 2006-11-19
I love your poems and all so well written would love just a quarter of your talent well done 5/5
Letty.... ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-20
This is very beautiful. You have just descibed most of the things that I have been looking for. You have written a beautiful poem that has really touched me. I wish that it was a little longer though. lol. Great job! 5/5 Keep up the excellent work!
Love
Letty
Bridgette ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-20
Beauitfully written! The 1st stanza was a very nie way to open it and I especially liked the last line. The 2nd stanza was absolutely amazing and you worded it perfectly. It probably stood out to me the most out of the whole poem. And the third stanza was really amazing also.. I could definitely relate to it alot. And I really like the way that you ended it. I'm not sure how to explain why, it was just an amazing way to end this poem! Beautiful write! 5/5
Willow ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-22
A touch of sadness to a beautiful love poem.... each stanza flowed perfectly, the last stanza really wrapped it up. Another masterpiece for you, my sweet.
Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela
linda ( F C )
at 2006-11-23
LOVE THE POEM COULD U PLZZ RETURN THE FAVOR BY COMMENTING MY POEMS AND RATE THEM TAHNK U THAT WILL SURELY MEAN A LOT TO ME
ONCE AGAIN THANK U.....
stormy ( F C D )
at 2006-11-24
Ahh...Dear Bert, this one does touch the readers heart. I love this poem, beautifully sad, beautifully said. Everyone that's lost a love can appreciate this write. I can't pick a favorite stanza on this one, they're all excellent, as you are. Hugs and love to ya..
Best Wishes,
Terry
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-24
Wow, this is so deeply written, i could just drown in the depth this one had...beautiful piece indeed
all the best and take care
Keanna Hopkins ( C )
at 2006-11-25
Thats really good! like it alot!
keanna
Farida Kira
at 2006-11-25
AMAZIN.....luvd it....especially this stanza:
If Helena launched a thousand ships
And ruled a dynasty
Then a thousand times I've kissed your lips
And tasted ecstasy.
beautifully written...
Sathish kumar
at 2006-11-25
Hey that last stanza really touched my heart man. keep up the good work ;-)
Illuminati ( F P C D )
at 2006-11-25
"It was you...'Twas always you
Who shaped my vision splendid
And took my very breath away
By beauty... never ended."
Now you are starting to understand love dear friend
~smiles~ Great write!!!!!!!!! It should be above 4.7
but what can you do? Not everyone undersatands poetry
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