Comments - It was you.

Yu Chung Lee ( C ) at 2006-11-18

I love it~ ^-^


CharismaticCountryGirl ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-18

This poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed reading every bit of it. I think that the whole thing was amazing and so I cannot pick a favorite part. Great job!
Charisma*

Bethan ( F P C ) at 2006-11-18

A beautiful poem, I absolutely loved it. Full of emotion and a real sense of loss but not despair, instead a strong feeling of rememberance overides it resulting in a beautifully touching piece. xxx

Deana ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-18

Your poems always have such elegance and sweet romantic images, beautiful!

Darien ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-19

Very nice imagery with the ships. A well used metaphor. You really have some splendid love poems. You have written better ones than this, but each poem holds a different meaning for the poet, and that is still something beautiful.

Vonnie McHugh ( F P C ) at 2006-11-19

I love your poems and all so well written would love just a quarter of your talent well done 5/5

Letty.... ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-20

This is very beautiful. You have just descibed most of the things that I have been looking for. You have written a beautiful poem that has really touched me. I wish that it was a little longer though. lol. Great job! 5/5 Keep up the excellent work!

Love
Letty

Bridgette ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-20

Beauitfully written! The 1st stanza was a very nie way to open it and I especially liked the last line. The 2nd stanza was absolutely amazing and you worded it perfectly. It probably stood out to me the most out of the whole poem. And the third stanza was really amazing also.. I could definitely relate to it alot. And I really like the way that you ended it. I'm not sure how to explain why, it was just an amazing way to end this poem! Beautiful write! 5/5

Willow ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-22

A touch of sadness to a beautiful love poem.... each stanza flowed perfectly, the last stanza really wrapped it up. Another masterpiece for you, my sweet.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

linda ( F C ) at 2006-11-23

LOVE THE POEM COULD U PLZZ RETURN THE FAVOR BY COMMENTING MY POEMS AND RATE THEM TAHNK U THAT WILL SURELY MEAN A LOT TO ME
ONCE AGAIN THANK U.....

End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-24

Wow, this is so deeply written, i could just drown in the depth this one had...beautiful piece indeed

all the best and take care

Keanna Hopkins ( C ) at 2006-11-25

Thats really good! like it alot!
keanna

Farida Kira at 2006-11-25

AMAZIN.....luvd it....especially this stanza:
If Helena launched a thousand ships
And ruled a dynasty
Then a thousand times I've kissed your lips
And tasted ecstasy.
beautifully written...

Sathish kumar at 2006-11-25

Hey that last stanza really touched my heart man. keep up the good work ;-)

christine at 2006-11-26

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You left me speechless i'm amazed at your great use of words
to be able to put feelings in to words the way you have you have great talent....


- ×·.d0ra ( F C ) at 2006-11-26

Hey darl a touching iece very well written. good job. keep em coming xx

Rachel Barnett ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-30

Beautifully penned.

Gary Jurechka ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-01

I can't believe I hadn't commented on this before (I know I read it before). This is so well written, I like the Greek metaphor, and the rhyme scheme is flawless and flows perfectly, but it is the pure emotion of love and loss that truly touches the heart. Excellent piece!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

NemO ( F C D ) at 2007-05-08

OmG!!!!!!!!!!!
I hvnt read your poems for so damn long!!!!!
I really missed those romantic words & those emotions & love ;)

Our sun at last had set.
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this line has a very powrful meaning =)
I totally loved your last stanza..it actually contained the whole Idea!!
V good work..I really missed you!!!

Keep it Up
G'luck
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