Matt Dahl ( F C )
at 2006-11-30
I read your poem and I think it was outstanding, keep up the good work!
Marina Ung
at 2006-12-03
Nice =] Go sweety
erin
at 2007-01-07
Not great , your kidding me how could you say that its fantastic!!!
Bobbi ( P )
at 2007-10-26
I like this poem because I understand where you're coming from. Keep it up!
~Bobbi
Hustle Hard ( C )
at 2008-01-17
No, i disagree with you cuz i thought that poem was good and dhenz..
just another silly teenage girl ( F C D )
at 2008-05-15
Wow. i really like this poem. 5/5.
keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
Tyler Durden ( F )
at 2008-05-24
I've thought about writing like this before, but didnt think I could pull it off.
You did amazingly. But I think I would have made some of the words stronger. add a phrase or too. Maybe a "WTF are you doing?" kinda thing, where the first stanza is concerned.
But all else, top notch.
5/5
I BRUISE EASY ( F P C D )
at 2008-09-10
I like it, something odd about it, even though it aint that good..
..i still like it!
OCTOBER X
XBlueberrymuffinzX ( F P C D )
at 2008-10-23
This was awesome.. Nice write. Each stanza was just amazing, and relatable for a lot of people i would imagine. Over all i loved this rite heaps. keep it up. 5/5
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