~ReMaLiSe~ ( C D )
at 2006-12-05
Wow! this poem I really enjoy reading...it's so deep and meaningful... I liked this a lot..Don't stop writing poems, your really good at it...keep up the good work...let me know what you think of mine pls...thnx...
PurpleMONKIES ( F P C )
at 2006-12-07
Ohmigosh! this is reallly pretty!! i loved it. 5/5
So now they are strangers
And yet their hearts yearn
For the ones they have lost
And the love letters burned
My fave stanza.
[[Koriey]] ( F C )
at 2007-01-09
That poem was beutiful, sad in a good way.
I love it. :]
Always,
Koriey
fatima ( F C )
at 2008-03-06
Your poems was well and truley amazing WOW.........please do read and comment on some of poems thankyou......... x x x tc
Xpersian princessX ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-01
This is a really good poem. it flowed really well. if you wanted to make iteven better you could even out the sylabols in each line a little more but thats only if your a perfectnist. its really good both from a poetc sense and a romantic one. even better it has a moving story to it. i was wondering weather its based on reality?
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