bianca ( C )
Aww thats really sweet
Mousie ( F P C D )
That's really sweet, good write too. you have a knack for writing. 5/5
Bridgette ( F P C D )
I absolutely love this poem. The love that you have for your mom is very apparent and touching in this piece. The flow and rhythm was really good also. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!!
Fruitl00p[LittleMissMistletoe] ( F C D )
Wow. i would never expect a guy writing this. this shows that you are a rlly great person. not many ppl appriciate what our mothers do and give up for us, i am even one of those ppl. i must say after reading this i looked at my mom and told her i loved her.
Ei thanks for your comment!...even if i'new i'll try and comment hehe..
I agree with fruitl00p... it's a bit surprising that a guys would write this and it's wonderful i might add... keep it up!...you showed what a great writer and person you are in this poem...
Music♥Freak ( F P C D )
Aww. That was very loving and I can tell as a reader that you must have a strong bond or relationship with you mom. =] Wonderful job writing this piece, keep it up! 5/5
L.S. Moore ( F P C D )
Another great poem, loved it.
♥LuvSuxGetDrunk♥ ( F P C D )
Awwwh, this was so sweet!
I loved everything about this, I can see how much you love her just from these words.
I think you did a wonderful job.
Oh my gosh this is beautiful i love my mom alot to i give u a 5/5
Burning~Wings ( F C )
Lol, thank you! You have really good poems too! I have to go but keep it up! buh-bye!
Poetically Speaking ( F P C D )
Aww wow... thats a really powerful, respectful poem. I really like this piece. It shows your love unconditionally for your mother.
~if only he knew~ ( F P C )
Awwww i see every poem is about your mom but you know what its ok i like them anyways 5/5
kiara ( F P C D )
Your mum must be very thankful to have a son lyk u
debbylyn ( F P C D )
This is so sweet. Your Mom must be very proud. What a nice tribute poem. Good job! 5/5
Narcissa ( P C D )
For me, to be able to say thay is a desire, a dream, a wish that will never come true!
I know imma a guy but i think it's fair to say that i love this poem man. Great job
яoиa ( F P C D )
Awwww..Wow! Haha! I guess we both appreciate what our Mom's do for us. That was lovely! I was thinking of using that poem instead of mine =P Haha! My mom would probably cry if she read this one. Hehe..of course I'd give you credit!
I wish i could say the same for my mom...good thing she's there for you....love the poem
Rachel Barnett ( F P C D )
What a sweet and heartfelt dedication to your mother. I bet she absolutely loved it. I loved reading it.
becca ♥ ( F P C D )
Wow.. another great one.. and its soo sweet.. :P the only thing is in the last stanza the last line is too long and it disrupts the flow.. but besides that .. spectacular write!