Gary Jurechka ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-12
This is fantastic.I love the images that you use, unique and symbolic.And the emotion you capture!This is true poetry in motion.The last stanza is especially outstanding.
Peace, Poetry, & Power,
Gary Jurechka
MiNHღDEE ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-12
This is absolutely beautiful . It captured such emotion and I loved the symbolism hat you used . I loved it from beginning to end . Wow . I don`t know what else I can say . Absolutely ah`mazingly done .
..__MiNDYY
goran ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-13
Great poem like always, i like your word choice, they are not simple. great job once again. 5/5
Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-16
Wow, wonderfully penned. The flow and the structure where great. I was just starting to get into it then it ended, seemed to me like it stoped ubruptly, but maybe it's just me. Overall great write.
Peace, Joe
Music♥Freak ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-16
Beautifully Wriiten.
Such fantastic imagery that just captures the reader's attention straight from the start.
Great flow and excellent vocabulary. Keep it up! 5/5
Stephanie
Alyson ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-20
I thought that it could have been a little more organized, but other then that it was good. *5/5*
Alyson
Rachel Barnett ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-20
I really like the imagery in this one. Good job!
Mousie ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-21
Beautiful poem, great flow, beautifully written... you are an exceptional writer. 5/5
Twisted Heart ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-28
You write with such eloquence and beauty. A depth of passion beyond your years.
Once again you have trapped me within the lines of your poetry and not released me until the end.
Great job
Jeannie
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