Comments - Ripped Paper Hearts / I Will Never Belong To You

ChaosHarbour at 2006-12-17

This is so pretty. I loved it and it explains exactly what I feel way to often. Would you mind checking out some of my poems?

Bryan ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-17

This is a very good poem ciao, 5/5!!!thanx for the comments, i miss yall too, i will be back as soon as i can.

Virna Estella ( D ) at 2006-12-19

Awww.. this one's full of emotions ciao.. 5/5 -virna

donna ( F C D ) at 2006-12-19

Aww what a sad poem.. Full of emotion and hurt.. It flowed excellently.. well done 5/5 xx

Twisted Heart ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-29

My ripped paper heart
Torn right at the crease
The little rips and previous tears
Still hurt, to say the least

Loved those lines. Very well done. A bit sad, could feel your pain and sense your tears.

Jeannie

¤Kitty¤ ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-01

Beautiful poem girl. I loved it. So sad, so sweet. but this time i found things you could fix:
When I'm not allowed in their world- leave it at THEIR'S, adding world again doesnt make it flow as well.

You don't mean to be so mean- you should use another word for mean, like cruel or something along those lines.




...♀Loving Him♂... ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-04

Holy wow... temperarly loss of words. i really liked this one... touched me close to home. you are a great writer ciao and your emotion really shows through in the poetry you write.

-/2 Terra

michelle ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-28

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so so soooooo sad! i almost cried reading it because i know what your going through....i have the same feeling...great job!

~*Who Cares?*~ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-08

Woah. im speechles. i loved this! the detailing was AMAZING and i can totally relate to this. wow. 10/5 if thats somehow possible lol. keep up the amazing work.

~*Perfect Chaos*~ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-27

This poem is so gut-wrenchingly emotional, I totally know how you feel!!! It's a wonderful poem. The flow is awesome! Thank you for the comment on my poem! 5/5!!!!!!!!!
Much Love,
<3 Danielle

⥠SoSickOfTears&acir ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-01

That last stanza...what a beautiful, perfect ending.
I absolutely adored it.
This was so wonderfully written, just like all the others I have read.
How hve I not come acorss your poetry before??!

isabel ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-11

Absolutely beautiful...

*isabel*

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01

Nice poem! Love It!!

Amy at 2008-03-30

To every person who's always been there for someone else who never felt as close.

I hate seeing people who've always been by someone's side and watching as one day their feelings change to ones of affection, only to see the look on their heart as their special someone pulled a 'I always thought of you as a sister' on them.

amazing, you hit the nail dead on! much love for this poem!

Ginger at 2008-04-12

Excellent poem. I know exactly what that feels like. You poem says all the things I never could. Great job! 5/5

Aliah ( P ) at 2008-09-14

Damn, this poem was really nice.
i could feel the pain
so true, damn true!

allex0r at 2014-10-31

Beautiful! so on point :)