- ×·.dora ( F C )
at 2006-12-24
0oh that was sweet. beautifully written. short and sweet. 0oh ur gettin married h0w exciting =D anyway keep up the good work. xx
lisa ( F P C )
at 2006-12-24
Fantastic as usual huni.your poems really inspire me .congratulations on the marriage!!i wish you every happiness
TRAGiC-BEAUTY♥ ( F P C )
at 2006-12-24
Aww! I can't believe you guys are getting married soo soon! omg! I'm soo happy for you! I can relate to it all except the last line obviously. lol Great poem!
xoxo
InDiA izZ Ju$$ 2 Go0D 2 B3 Tru3 ( F P C )
at 2006-12-24
5/5!! WOW this POEM IS BEAUTIFUL..SIMPLY WOW!! AND i am very HAPPY for U and Ur MARCUS!! Plz Rate n Comments otha of my poems as well ;)
**Knee Deep and Drowning** ( F P C )
at 2006-12-24
This is really cute... and also very good... 5/5
-Knee Deep and Drowning
CharismaticCountryGirl ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-26
Awww....such a sweet poem, I really loved it Gem. It was so good! Very sweet ending too!
Charisma*
~*Who Cares?*~ ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-27
Awwwww! i REALLY liked this one. you made it work just so well! i loved the ending, thats way cute! amazing..yet again. 5/5
x.Athame.x ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-27
Absolutely amazing. Great job! *5/5
Katie
at 2006-12-27
This is a very good poem can I show it tomy boyfriend? Well he'll like it if you say yes! Soo are you and your boyfriend or Fiancee still together me and my boyfriend have been together for a little more than a year which I know isn't long but yeah we want to get married but if we do we'll get married in like 2 years yeah it's because he is on his mission and I'm still in High school but by the time he gets back I'll be in College and he'll start college with me almost yeah I love him heis the most wonderful man I have ever met I can't wait for hi to return! Well now that I bored you with my story I'll let you get back to poem writing or whatever you're doing well good poem Bye
Love Katie
PS I'll be Mrs. Hallam in 2008 too lol
Chyrelle ( P )
at 2006-12-28
*sniff* that was so beautiful! i hope 2 spend tha rest of my life w/ sum1
kersten ( F P )
at 2006-12-28
Ya no I really like this its very good keep up the good work..... And I read some of your other poems they were WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Does He Love Me 4 Me ( C )
at 2006-12-28
Thats good nice poem
-×.rayshell ··
at 2006-12-29
I really like this. The short lines, the simple words...and it's really touching.
5/5
Laura Kalyta ( P )
at 2006-12-30
"When I found you
I found myself
I found a guy
Like no one else"
Simply just love this. If this is what true love really is, then that's what I want when I'm older!
Keep it up!
5/5
~Laura
Diana J. Armenta
at 2006-12-30
Loving this poem...its nice
southernღcharm ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-31
Awwww. That's such a cute and sweet poem! I loved this one so much!
Keep up the awesome work!
God Bless 5/5
~Tay~
Angela
at 2006-12-31
I am in luv with dis poem. I just luv it.
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