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marl ( F C D ) at 2006-12-30

Your are one of my favorite poets...
your writing is so well
this is one of my favorites...from yours..

¤Kitty¤ ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-30

I enjoyed that. it was creatively written. 5/5

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-30

Very beautiful poem. Loved reading this one.

Ilinca Milosan ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-30

Wonderful poem! I love the first stanza - such beautiful images!
Awesome write! 5/5

Tom Swart ( F P C ) at 2007-01-02

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. May 2007 be a good year for youâ¦peace

Italian Stallion ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-05

Yet another wonderfully written peice of poetry by a outstanding poet. I loved it. The flow was good as well as the strucutre. And the Rhymes where excellent. Keep up the awesome work.

Peace, Joe

яoиa ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-16

Wonderful! Simply wonderful! I love the imagery in this poem and the deep emotion! I loved the words you used! Flawless! Great job!
5/5

Southern|♥|Love ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-26

This is such a beautiful poem! Great work! You use of vocabulary was strong and really made the poem more emotional I guess you can say.
Keep up the great work.
God Bless 5/5


Rasheed Khokhar ( C ) at 2007-10-01

Very Beautiful Poem, Really I enjoyed....
Take Care 5/5

shamvi ( C ) at 2008-01-11

Wow..its nice..
beautifully said

SMILEoften ( F P ) at 2008-06-12

Once again, an amazing read. This one flowed beautifully, as well. I also love your word selection, as in phrases like "bedazzled eyes". This sort of expression isn't used a lot -- it's a rare thing to say and I like it! It really grabbed my attention. 5/5 from Shanna.

Jackie ( C ) at 2009-12-13

This is very beautiful:)
i loved it and i hope you find someone like the guy you're talking about in this poem:]
loved it!
5/5
keep on writting(:

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