Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-06
Rachel,
I was crying as I read your beautiful touching poem. This is so sad and yet so beautiful. Excellent job!
linda ( F C )
at 2007-01-06
Wow this is really sad...it made me cry... i love this poem keep doing the great job
**Knee Deep and Drowning** ( F P C )
at 2007-01-06
This is a really good poem.
Alot of deep words. Anyway
Great job. 5/5
-Knee Deep and Drowning
lexie ( P C D )
at 2007-01-06
This was written so beautifully.it shares the pain of losing a loved one like so many have.that pain was put into such lovely words for such a hard thing.i know what its like to have just a picture.everyday i see his picture,and it hurts.but the pain does get easier,little by little.beautiful work.5/5
--lexie
mildura ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-06
One word POWERFUL i loved it keep it up u just been added to my favs=]
great job
Erica Jovie© ( F C )
at 2007-01-06
This is really sad! just remember that God has a plan...even when we don't understand it...HARD i know but what else can we do but pray. YOu are very talented!! thank you for your comment!! God bless-Erica
~*Who Cares?*~ ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-06
Wow this was really really good. i liked the idea and the wording was perfect. there isnt anything id change about this! the detailing! 5/5. the flow. 5/5. overall-lol 5/5. excellent work:)
¤°º♥рєяfєст ιмрє ( F C D )
at 2007-01-07
Wow, touching poem, nicley written!
The rhyming is absolutly perfect!! awsome work! definatly a 5/5 From me!
Love Steph
*Gem* ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-07
This is one of the best poems i've read of yours..
The words, the tone, it was impeccable. An incredibly moving piece
Keep writing!
5/5
*Gem*
debbylyn ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-07
This is my favorite poem by you Rachel! Absolutely beautiful! It captures the loss of a loved one perfectly. Flawess rhyming, flow, wording, feeling....it has it all.
I give it a 10!
john graver ( C )
at 2007-01-07
Great write. I enjoyed this one. sad and beautiful all in the same breathe. 5/5
Narcissa ( P C D )
at 2007-01-07
Hi, this was gorgeous! absolutely terrific! ok, so i read your post in the competition area, and it gave me an idea, could i set up a competition called picture in a frame plz? since its the name of your poem, i thought i just had to ask!
did i say - i love your poem! good job!
Bob Shank ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-07
The loss of a loved one is so hard to accept, especially when they are a constant in your life> I enjoyed reading the heartfelt emotion and the wonderful creative touch you gave this, one can see the slight bitterness and yet it was tactfully done....Very nice....
and just FYI a loved one never leaves, they remain as close as your heart and memories.....It is good to have experienced love that touches deep enough to write about it....
Tara-Kay ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-08
Wow, Rachel. i loved that and i could see your pain and also the pain of Cindy's. You are so talented and your poems come from deep in your heart. keep writing such beautiful poetry.
love Tara-Kay
TheWorldFell&UWerentThere ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-08
Really good. No my poem wasnt for a contest. But you can enter in my {[[Titled Contest]]} its in contests n that. I think youd do good!
Southern|♥|Love ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-08
This is beautiful! Wow. I can't even begin to say a word on how amazing this was. Just keep up the wonderful work! God bless 5/5
~Tay
яoиa ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-08
I loved this poem! The way you wrote it was excellent and the flow was very smooth! It was just amazing!
5/5 =)
Tammie ♥ ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-09
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That was amazing. Truely, the storyline, the flow, the rhyming, everything about it was written so well. It's full of emotion, i love to see that in poems. Excellent, i really enjoyed reading it. =] 5/5 Definately.
Tammie
♥SoSickOfTears♥ ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-10
This was so sad, but so beautifully written...a real pleasure to read.
I loved the imagery used in this.
Excellent work.
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