stuart s ( C )
at 2007-10-25
Wwoooowwww this is awsom :) yet again hits close to home lots of feeling put into this :) great poem great work 5/5...in fact screw 5 10/10 :P
the unloved and unwanted ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-12
Good job 5/5 i like it it caries the emotions throught it very well.
.:*finally letting go*:. ( F )
at 2008-02-12
This poem is amazing and kinda made me tear up.. All of these questions had gone though my mind in my last relationship.. this poem is just great.. i love it!
Colors Of The Heart ( F P C )
at 2008-07-13
This was beautifully written. i can relate, ive been there and done that.
I know what i want, i want us to be
but not if the only one wanting this is me.
i loved those two lines. it was a perfect finish to this poem. you said what was on your mind and in your heart. job well done. 5/5.
-Ashlei.
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