Brittiny
at 2007-10-24
Very beautiful i found that kind of love once then i turned out he loved more then just one girl. so yeah i hope your love works out for you well 5/5 keep up the good work
stuart s ( C )
at 2007-10-25
Hey great poem i really liked it :) hits close to home too very well portrayed 5/5
guilty ( F C )
at 2007-10-26
Isnt it great when you can act the way you are and not pretending to be not yourself,
haha hold on to that,
the unloved and unwanted ( F P C D )
at 2007-11-14
Very nice. The flow was off a little, but the message still came through. 5/5
FALLiNGAPART ( F P C )
at 2007-11-19
Very Pretty<3
Secret lover ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-31
Wow nice poem i really liked it but there were some spelling mistakes.anyway nice poem=)
Secret lover ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-31
Wow nice poem i really liked it but there were some spelling mistakes.anyway nice poem=)
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