♥ii love you♥ ( C )
at 2007-01-19
This poem shows alot of compassion and meaning.. i can relate =) butt try shorter lines and like a long poem if u know what i mean..
well check mine out too!
Kat ( F C D )
at 2007-01-19
Really good! Shows feelings well. Great job. Maybe try taking it out of paragraph form, that might sounds really good. Keep it up! 5/5
~Kat~
JUSTMEXXX ( C )
at 2007-01-20
Hey girl the wedding plans are gowing ok... Just glad that we are having our summers in October my German friend are com......to very happy the last time i saw her was almost 9 years ago in Atlanta (USA) we've met there and we loved the USA...very good memories. have a wonderful weekend for what's left of it.
now 11:32 pm time for me to go to bed... xxx
º¨[&&] You make me ||Smile|| l
at 2007-01-23
Good work on all your poems...keep it up
weelindz
at 2007-01-30
Great poem
:) Sammy Bear :) ( F C )
at 2007-01-31
Your poem should have a bit more structure but the words were beautifully written keep it up =)
:) Sammy Bear :) ( F C )
at 2007-01-31
Your poem should have a bit more structure but the words were beautifully written keep it up =)
Sara ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-31
You have been in my heart every hour, every minute and every second! --my favorite line!...lol..so true w. me...lol..comment back!! lol
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