Comments

Dave ( F C D ) at 2007-02-01

That was really good. Loved the re-occurring theme with different variations. Very nice! Dave.

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-01

Nice one Rachel....different for you....love the flow and rhythm.....5/5

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-01

Excellent job Rachel! Your word choices are wonderful. The flow is great. I think you are Beautiful also!

Barry... ( F C ) at 2007-02-02

Owch!

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-02

I loved it! Your so great 5/5
*kaila*

ben thompson ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-03

I know lots of broken things. awesome write. good flow. 5/5 from me.

Illuminati ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-03

Oh the waves of rhyme.~smiles~
It was a joy to read your poem
Thank you for sharing this jewel

billy rob ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-04

"Broken sleep, love's the cause,
digs at me with sharpened claws.
Broken spirit, love of sorrow,
stolen now is my tomorrow."

I love the way you did this, especially the above. Your talent is special, my friend. Well done. Billy Rob

Barry... ( F C ) at 2007-02-05

Owch.owch.....

JYOTI RANA ( F P C ) at 2007-02-07

Great poem. I like it very much.

lisa ( F P C ) at 2007-02-08

Excellent poem.the flow was amazing .i loved it well done.

^*tattered*^^*torn*^ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-08

I love this poem well written you have amazing talent keep it up

cherisblair at 2007-02-08

I love it great poem!!

Heart Breaker at 2007-02-08

I loved your poem keep it up!!

Music♥Memories ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-08

Sad & Unique.
The poem was unique, something I have never seen before. I mean this is a good way, lol.

You have tremendous amounts of talent. You have a way of capturing heartbreaking feelings into one poem. Absolutely fantastic. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Romantic Lover ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-08

That was so sad. Nice poem.

forever in love ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-08

Very sad poem. made me feel sad also. gd luck

Poonam ( P C D ) at 2007-02-11

Great poem. i repetition of broken whatever is very effective. i love:
Broken hope, love's a game,
doesn't last, ends the same.
Broken sleep, love's the cause,

becca ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-14

COMMENT # 2

i really love this poem.. the emotion is over the top and WONDERFUL! the rhymes are fit together perfectly and the flow is flawless... great job

Pheadrah at 2007-02-17

Sad..
beautiful pain.
Good job Rachel!!
It's tan diferente; I love that!

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