GrammaConcept ( F P C )
at 2007-02-18
Lovely......and Deep.
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-18
Debbie,
This is so beautiful and so sad. The poem just pulls you right in. Your word choices are so wonderful. You have written a excellent piece here. ~Bravo~
Love You Cindy
ben thompson ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-18
BEAUTIFUL VERSES. GREAT WRITE
Dave ( F C D )
at 2007-02-18
Wow, that was fantastic. Who the hell voted this at less than a five? Great work! Really! Awesome, Dave.
Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D )
at 2007-02-18
Who ever downvoted this is an idiot...but votes don't really matter...especially with such a beautiful poem like yours. This was so amazing. I love how you wrote this. I'm really at a loss for words. I just love your poetry. Beautiful write!
-` Liz
Pheadrah
at 2007-02-19
'As tears frozen in time
Deep and lonely
'Til ocean is river
And you become mine '
Passionate.. I really love it Debbie,
Keep it up and take care.. Pheadrah
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-19
Your poems are always beautifully worded and full of emotion. EXCELLENT JOB. Whoever voted this down is jealous!!!
elektra
at 2007-02-19
Dramatic
Enchanting
Believing
Best
Young
Levitating
Yostentating
Naturally talented
you are the best writer who has ever hypnotized us by your unicness
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-20
This is the best one i have read for a very long time....everything abt it is just so poetic and thats what we are supposed to find in this site.. :o)
very nicely written indeed
all the best and take care
Romantic Lover ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-22
This was really beautiful and so nicely written. Great job.
dumxlicious
at 2007-02-23
Llllllllooooovvvveeeeeee IT !
^-^
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-24
A beautifully romantic write, You can feel the intensity as you read, Wonderful.
Yuna ( F C D )
at 2007-02-24
Very well done. I enjoyed the whole set-up and how well the poem flowed. It created, in the end, a very good poem!
forever in love ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-25
Awwwwwwwww. such a gr8 writing. such a gr8 talent. very good and nicely done too. i am after reading this and found the reason tht y i write poems. gd luck take care
goran ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-02
Nice poem, greatly written yet i dont know why is it downvoted, i think it is no fair that some irresponsible person's rate a great poem like that, it shows they have no idea what the art of poetry means, im wondering what those ppl doing here waisting their time.
Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-03
Excellent write, I wish it was longer. The flow was good and the strucutre too. Keep the great work coming.
Peace, Joe
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-04
"Our words touch
As lips, softly searching"
Beautifully done. Reminds me of a verse in one of Joan Baez's songs of old, "Diamonds And Rust." Goes something like: "Our words come out out white frost, mingle, and hang in the air, speaking strictly for me, we both could have died then and there."
A beautiful piece Debbylyn. Very well done. Billy Rob
Barry ( F C )
at 2007-03-22
Debbie computer gone down....sorry!!!!
A Poem's kiss
Flows from my pen
To your heart
Lingering, longing
As a silent embrace
Though we're apart
Our words touch
As lips, softly searching
Verses thrill the soul
Separation of One
In lonely sky blue
Until we are whole
Sorrows in stanzas
Writ with abundance
As tears frozen in time
Deep and lonely
'Til ocean is river
And you become mine
this poem is sensational.....
why pick a line take it all.....like I have
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