Krzysztof J. ( F P C )
at 2007-03-21
Its cute :)) love it :)) 5/5
Romantic Lover ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-21
I'm not a huge fan of triolets, but I really liked this one. Enough to think that I should try it.
Nice job.
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-21
Gem
You still amaze me with your formed poems. This was really cute.
Great job!
Love Cindy
chavii ( F C D )
at 2007-03-21
Such sweet tender piece of poetry, loved it .
Take care
chavii.
*Charisma* ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-21
Oh I love that line that your heart has two left feet! That was soooo cute! This was adorable Gem....like a love nursery rhyme. Just so sweet!
Charisma*
Bernadette ( F C )
at 2007-03-21
My Heart Has Two Left Feet Eh...Most Interesting And Yet Very Random!! Funny And Cute Too. Once Again, I'd Give It A 5/5, (Like I Always Do, LOL), well just wanted to answer your comment and say thanks for it, well no, i'm not in a poetry group let alone in a club on this site...why you may be thinking!? well the truth is I really don't know =S, I haven't really thought about it =\
Bernadette Contreras =)
TRAGiC-BEAUTY♥ ( F P C )
at 2007-03-21
Awww. that was so sweet aw. omg. haha. i know this feelinggg! haha. cute poem baby<33
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-22
This is so sweet...was just imagining a heart with two left feets running..lolol this is so cute indeed...loved ur imagination....beuatifully written
all the best and take care
¤.d0rA ( F C )
at 2007-03-24
Hey hun havent been on the site in ages glad to see uve posted so many poems. just catching up now, great job with this one. xx
K.i.T.t.Y. ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-24
Aww. nice structure flow rhythm and so on. this poem was cute. i loved the line "my heart has two left feet" thats awesome.
5/5. and congratz on winning my contest.
Rammaneekun
at 2007-03-27
My heart is like that, too! lol!
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-27
Very cute. Excellent job on this form Gem!!!!!!
GrammaConcept ( F C )
at 2007-03-28
Really terrific......catchy, too....;-)
WiSHFUL THiNKER ( F D )
at 2007-03-28
Aww... that's cute! Very good
Stitch ( F P )
at 2007-06-03
You really thought that out. It was good though I liked it.
Mariselly
at 2007-06-20
That was very cute!
Caro
at 2007-06-20
Its really cute ...llol.. i like it :P
(*caro*)
Koo
at 2007-07-27
I like it ^_^ i like the style and i think its really cute and it made me smile =)
Dark Secrets ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-24
Awwwwwwww its soo sweet! I loved it!
kia
at 2007-11-10
I really like this poem........
Good job
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