Jenna davies ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-22
Very sweet and I liked that about it
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-22
Debbylyn
I am so glad you posted this. It is written with such beauty and love,
Wish that I were time
To give back what has passed
To ask for all and nothing
Just to be with you at last
This stanza really touched my heart.
Love you Cindy
Romantic Lover ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-22
Oh that was so touching. A truly beautiful poem.
I loved it.
Barry ( F C )
at 2007-03-23
A love so true and my only one…like the rain, snow, moon and golden sun
I love you as this verse has to run…my deep and lonely one
You are mine….like the stars that shine…forever till the end of time.....
Barry...you are so beautiful
Barry ( F C )
at 2007-03-23
Debbie please ignore a?|
words from by Pablo Neruda
I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way
than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.
YOU ARE SO BEAUTIFUL....
chavii ( F C D )
at 2007-03-23
This poem is so beautiful and full of sweet tender love. Amazing write really touches ones heart.
jolee
at 2007-03-23
Wow, i've probably never read a more amazing poem! i LOVED it
you are a very very talented writer
dont ever stop!
Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D )
at 2007-03-23
Wish that I were time
To give back what has passed
To ask for all and nothing
Just to be with you at last.
___
I love that stanza, amazing ending. Debbie, this poem is just beautiful. It touched my heart deeply and i can relate to it on so many levels. Brilliant piece. Never stop writing.
` Liz
5/5
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-25
"Wish that I were time
To give back what has passed"
What a beautiful love poem. I particularly like the above lyric. How very deep that is. Very well done. Very well done, indeed. Billy Rob
*Gem* ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-26
"Wish that I were time
To give back what has passed"
Thats amazing... how many times has my mind thought a variation of those words..
Well done m'dear.
This poem speaks great volumes
5/5
*gem*
ben thompson ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-26
Wow Debbie excellent job on this poem.
Wish that I were the stars
To light your darkest night
To hold your heart inside me
A beacon shining bright
I know these feelings so well.
All the best
Ben
forever in love ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-27
I have read all your poem. it is realy gr8 symbol of love. you show that how much you love to a special person. i loved your poem. that was the best poem whihc i read today. i wish someone wouldsay me these all words. which you wrote in your poem.. gr8 work 5/5 take care.
Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-27
Wow Debbie, that was beautifully written, I loved it. The flow and the emotion within was outstanding, keep up the wonderful work.
Peace, Joe
David ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-27
Well i also agree this is a very beautiful poem. the structure i thought was excellent!
5/5 David
Tom K ( F )
at 2007-03-29
Thank you for writing this sweet beautiful poem, I loved it. I identify so well with the thoughts of this poem. I will have to go back and read some more of your lovely writings. thank you.
tom
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