~forgotten~mistake~ ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-25
Aww thats so amazing. well done thats excellent x x x x
Jochsey ( F C )
at 2007-03-28
That was really well written and a really good poem. Good work
Jochsey
Hate|Love ( F C D )
at 2007-03-30
Hey.. Thanks for the comment, It helped a lot!
I loved this poem, It's great! :)
Omg sorry I repeat this "great" akll the time but However....
Ok I can say... Wonderful.. Yeah
This poem is wonderful x) lol...
Well anyway
keep up the 'wonderful' job
Take care
5/5
TuxedoBlack ( F P C )
at 2007-04-18
I loved how the last line worked in. I thought this was really good, because it went from really sad.
5/5 really nicely written.
Anonymous Angel ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-23
Hey,
a nicely written poem, a good flow, and uhm i have nothing more to say ^_^
kisse stephanie
xThatxBoyxIsxBeautifulx ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-06
Awww, such a beautiful poem!
You showed much of the feeling and
thoughts that goes on. Well described
and penned. God bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)
5/6 one more
Wings of Steel ( F C )
at 2007-06-17
This is a gr8 poem!!! luvd it gr8ly!!
keep it up
love bree x
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