End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-05
Cindy,
Would have given up my life for you
You vowed that you would never leave
Yet here I am so cold and alone
Your words of love I always believed
I know from where this came.
I really feel great after every collab that we do, You are certainly a great soul i have ever met. I hope we keep this up.
All the best and take care
Thanks a ton for everything
David ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-05
Oh well done. this was an amazing poem! both of you! the wording and ammount of love in this poem was superb.
5/5 David
Twisted Heart ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-05
Cindy and End of Eternity,
You have penned a beautiful write. The devestation of which you wrote this, shows in every verse... every line. To know that kind of love and loss is one that I,, too, can relate with. It's the most heartwrenching feeling one could ever experience.
You two did an exceptional job on this... Bravo.
Always,
Jeannie
Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D )
at 2007-04-05
As I said to Nitin, this poem was completely mind blowing. I fell in love with it. ;p I tried picking my favourite stanza, but the whole poem is just amazing. I love every line of it. Never stop writing!
` Liz
chavii ( F C D )
at 2007-04-05
Amazing great write , wonderful job by you two.You two are great team.
©ShadowsOnHerFace ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-05
Like Liz said, mind blowing. Absolutly amazing. I love it. You two work well together. I can relate as you know. Beautiful.
xDanikax
Take Care
xxoxoxx
debbylyn ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-05
Nicely written collab once again....can't pick a fav verse....love it all! 5/5 Debbie
*Gem* ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-06
"Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
Always needed you here with me
To our love I'll always be true"
Beautiful! Simply beautiful!
When you two do a collab, i already know it's going to be a diamond!!
And i'm never disappointed =)
5/5
*gem*
ben thompson ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-07
This poem by you and End Of Eternity Is really great. Hope you guys write many more of these pieces. Keep up the good work.
Nice to see you happy.
Ben
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-08
Bravo! What a piece. My kind of write, I assure you. You both did an excellent job with this. It's as if you were thinking exactly the same thoughts. Well done to you both. Very well done. 5/5 Billy Rob
amanda flood ( C )
at 2007-04-08
Wow that was truely excellent very sad,sorry you lost your love.hope one day you will be reunited again.
all in all excellent
please if u hav time i would really like if u could comment on one of my poems only writting short time your say would mean a lot thank you
amanda
Lithium ( F P C )
at 2007-04-09
Great poem, i love the idea of the midnight train thats really cool, your words as always have an impact on my emotions as they are so deep and heartfelt, another wonderful poem .
Romantic Lover ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-10
"Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
Always needed you here with me
To our love I'll always be true"
This stanza was my favorite. This was an excellent collab and so heartwarming.
Bravo.
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-10
Very nice collaboration. It is nice to see styles mesh in these type writes. Full of emotion.
Barry ( F C )
at 2007-04-11
Beautifully written by you both...styles do mesh and bring something else with it.....
I could not pick out one verse the whole poem was so good........
Nicole ( F P C )
at 2007-04-17
5/5 simply beautiful poem. never a truer word spoken. i'm able to relate to everything you've written. well done your poem is amazing.
forever in love ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-01
Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
i am nominated this poem as a contest . i am giving my vote as a senior memebr. its so nice work. i loved the every word of this poem. good expression. its my first vote for contest to anyone as a senoir memeber.
i loved the work you both had done in this poem.
take care.
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