ImNotPerfect20 ( F C D )
at 2007-04-27
Awsome! most my poems are from scratch thats why the flow on them are not that great.. what you see is directly from my head. only with minor fixing on some.. anyway good job 5/5.. to bad your only 16 haha jk.
Miu. ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-27
Is so awseome how u have put houmor in it like it :D like make it kinda original next to poems i have read! Amazing poem:) Keep up the great work!
XxTyphoidxX ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-27
You're a real commenter dear...and for the poem that this girl is kinda lucky that made you dream and make you fail the exams..love is in this poem..and the flow really keeps you going
Have a nice day
Take care
Laura
Fire-lilly ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-27
Sweet poem. I really liked it. It has a great flow to it. I would let some one get in the way of my grades to much:)
5/5
CrazygirlAlly ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-27
It is an awesome poem, seems like it is sorta a rap song. But I liked it. Anyhow, great write, keep up the good work. =)
Vanilla ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-27
Aw. That was such a "cute" poem. Can't think of the word...I thought it was all good except the third stanza, the flow left there but it all came together in the end.
Too bad I'm failing English;
It's worth that sacrifice, for you.
Maybe if I skip my finals,
all my dreams just may come true...
^^I especially loved that!
Great job 5/5 :D
mistressxsork ( F C D )
at 2007-04-28
Huhm, I saw you posting in the forums.. and I haven't saw you on the site, so.. I decided that I would check out your poetry.
"It's not -that- bad" .. doesn't that sentence just eat you up inside? Ha. Well.. The emotion was there, surely.. the heart, obviously.. and the pattern.. in some way or another.
One simple question though.. How can one person make you fail English? To me.. I'm hearing this poem like.. "This girl is my scapegoat". I don't know, get to back to me with an answer..
Good work.. 4.8/5
Lala[licious]
at 2007-04-28
Ok from your picture-you are cute
from your poems-you are hott
guys that write poetry this good...
O wwooooowwww! thats all i can say!
WOW!!! i love the poem. a guy that is cute and write poetry... any girl that wouldnt want you is JUST CRAYZZEE!
xThatxBoyxIsxBeautifulx ( F P C D )
at 2007-04-28
I make no sound.
^I don't make a sound
Very cute. Remindes me of my boyfriend. Only he's failing in Geometry, not English. He's always on the phone with me and does his homework, but unfortunatly wants to talk to me instead of homework. Well back to the poem. Lol. Very well done, cute and funny too. Very well done! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy^_^
*bloody*wrists* ( F P C )
at 2007-04-30
Damn! if this is juss scratch writing...wow. ur an amazing writer. this poem does bring a smile to ones face after reading it. :P
Alex ( F C D )
at 2007-05-01
This ones cute. I enjoyed it. Yeah...I'm homeschooled and in my last relationship I hardly ever did school work...Yippee now I'm behind...... Bleh.
~Alex~
Teria ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-04
Awh. How sweet. :D This was a great poem! I loved how it was written out ( flow wording etc..)
One thing though: "every one without's a waste;"
Shouldn't that be everyone's without a waste?
Or am I just not.. thinking straight this morning. Lol.
Overall you did a great job. I loved it. :D
Keep it up.
BoBa ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-05
Lol great ending. Anyways this was a very well written poem with a great flow. If this is scratch I wonder how you write when it isnt. Keep writing. 5/5
Sabree
at 2007-06-25
Wow...that is amazing. I mainly write scratch poetry...actually all but like five of them are...and i cant believe that this poem was. It seems as if so much work was put into it. you are an amazing writer and i know you will go far. This poem speaks wonders. What you speak of in it may be of failing...but there is a deeper message in it. It speaks of obsession and of falling down fast. It speaks of love and romance, of pain and sadness. This poem projects the image of fallling behind because your soaring so high above the clouds. I understand that more than you will ever know. Wonderful poem. I shall give you a 4/5. Keep up the good work.
-Sabree
Mer Divinity ( F C D )
at 2007-07-28
Great poem. :) I can see your sentiment through the words, and the structure of the poem is pertinent, just because the way you're expressing your emotions. :) 5/5
Marina
at 2007-10-22
When i first read the title, smile lingered on my face. i know it did, 'cause my little brother smiled too. you made my day. thank you =D
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