Comments

Fire lilies ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-07

I thought that it was very nice. Though I do think that it would be better if it was a little longer. Other then that it was great and had a nice flow. 5/5

Nick ( F C D ) at 2007-05-09

I like how it was easy to read and not to comlicated. It may have came from scratch, but it was very well written. Keep up the good work Stephen.

Randii at 2007-06-11

I love ur poem...its so deep...and emotional......so beautiful.really!!!

SelenaWolf at 2007-07-07

Cute poem - makes me think of two nights ago, when I first slept next to my boyfriend.
(nothing more ^^)
He also has blue eyes so it's funny...

PrInCeSs1210 at 2007-07-10

I really like this piece of writing. well done.

I stand alone ( F C D ) at 2008-01-11

I really like this poem great job! keep it up!