Comments - One Night Of Bliss (Collab)

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-10

Nitin
With each collab we write. Our friendship grows. This was such a pleasure to write. You are really teaching me so much about expanding myself as a writer. Thank you for everything.
You are a wonderful writer and friend.
Love Cindy

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-10

Nitin
With each collab we write. Our friendship grows. This was such a pleasure to write. You are really teaching me so much about expanding myself as a writer. Thank you for everything.
You are a wonderful writer and friend.
Love Cindy

Lithium ( F P C ) at 2007-05-10

FANTASIC this is really really good, again you have such a way with words its really unlike anything i've even read, you inspire me to keep writing and get to the level at which i see you today. great work!

*Gem* ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-10

"Blend with my soul tonight
And let me breathe for you
Wrap my heart within yours
Melting one body, no more two"

That stanza was so beautiful. Each collab from you two just gets better and better!
It was romantic yet sexy, a beautiful combination!
Bravo sweets!
5/5
*Gem*

(And no, i don't know any wolf movies really apart from dog soldiers and that was a gory werewolf movie, lol. Hilarious though!)

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-10

Well done on another wonderful collab! You and Cindy do such an awesome job...can't tell who wrote which stanza...your styles mesh so well...

Kiss me beneath my skin
Drink my lips sweet like wine
Play with my lonely fingertips
Touch every vein of mine

^ This verse is so beautiful and romantic!

Congrats on another masterpiece! All the best, Debbie

Barry ( F C ) at 2007-05-12

Well!! you two have blown the a few cobwebs away with this.......sensational write....
Nitin you just come into my domain as a poet
well done!! love the poem but these lines
Squeeze this trigger of love
Gently blow my soul away
With your fingers of magic
Leave scars for every day
just awesome....... excellent well done!!

ben thompson ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-16

Like I told Cindy this poem is really great. Very sensual and passion filled. You amaze me how well the two of you write together.
Keep it up.

Blend with my soul tonight
And let me breathe for you
Wrap my heart within yours
Melting one body, no more two

Pacifying our bodies needs
Losing myself in your kiss
Your touch leaving memories
Of our one night of bliss

These are my favorite parts.
All the best my friend.
Ben

Princess Love ( F P C ) at 2007-05-17

Wow, now thats what I call passion. Great collab indeed. Both of your talents blend perfectly in every poem you write. Keep it up.

amanda flood ( C ) at 2007-05-24

Wow excellent u decride it so well if only it stayed like that forever [love] its a pain after a while lol

chavii ( F C D ) at 2007-06-02

Such beautiful and passionate poem , brilliantly penned by you two.keep it up !

Best wishes
chavii.

Chris plain and simple ( F C ) at 2007-06-07

Wow you just have a gift for writing poetry. This one was really good though, my favorite. Well good job man. Good job to Cindy too. Take it easy

Angela at 2008-03-05

Wow..this is really good.your work together is awesome.keep at it

matt at 2008-05-15

Your poeme is so good but.. writting a poem with the help of someone is not so great