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at 2007-05-21
That is such a good poem and it is the same way for me!! great job =)
Jenni Marie ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-22
Ohhh this was so sad...I could sense the emotion and pain behind the words...the imagery used was beautiful, it creates vivid pictures and I liked the ending, I found it to be very intense.
xxSnow AngeLxx ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-22
Beautiful poem...the lines were filled with pain n strong emotions ...the choice of words is beautiful...very good heart felt peice!
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx
Miu. ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-22
Aww like it was so amazing poem! All the feelings and special moments for you in it. Ending was so great! I just loved this poem! 5/5
M1K4 ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-24
O wow this is amazing i mean it is so true! LIke i have so many memories of my ex that i still cant get out of my head and i just love how much i can relate to this poem! 5/5
Sandra D ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-25
Ok, i guess you already know i LOVE this poem...
i don't exactly know why, but this poem is like amazing! it really got to me when i was first reading it, and i thought there was like so much emotion in it. after i read those first three lines, i already knew i was going to love it, and i was not dissappionted.
great job with this, it's really one of my absolute favorites on here!
Victoria Rainey ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-25
I really hope you know that you have talent and that talent I hope you ever stop writing because you are really good.. it would be a wst eif you dtopped... good job and keep it up.. srry there isn't anything abiut the poem that I would change anyway .. good job once again 5/5
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