Comments - One More Forever

Natalie ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-22

That is a sweet poem... great job5/5

Vanessa ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-23

Wow you could feel your emtions pouring out of this one. It was really sweet, to write this for the specail one in your life. The flow was perfect, and the word choice was amazing. another well done job 5/5

Mohamed Sujaau-fsams ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-23

Its really special and I loved reading it. Keep up the good work. Great 5/5

GodsGift ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-24

It's funny how when your with the one you love the clock seems to move ten times as fast as it usually does. But when your apart it never seems to move and the minutes seem like hours. Excellent write 5/5

Tim Mauntler ( F P C ) at 2007-06-05

GREAT POEM!!! Did you show that special person this poem? If you have, I'm sure they loved it...

ItsLoVe SwEetEstLOve ( F P C ) at 2008-02-29

Wow... this got me special... sure do feel special reading this.

Raindrops ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-14

Dang straight one more forever is all i ask sometimes too nice job 5/5

Andrew ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-03

Nice poem, keep it up

Andrew ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-03

Nice poem, keep it up