Comments - Look Away

xIAmAPiratex ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-25

Reminds me of some things. Great job Nicole! It's wonderful to see you back around!

<3

Amy ( F P C ) at 2007-05-25

Good poem, i know how you feel!

Gary Jurechka ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-02

I know that I, and many others can really relate to the feelings and meanings of this poem. Sometimes we lie to ourselves to get through things. This reminds me of a piece of mine called The Duality Of Existence in that aspect. As long as we know deep down that it takes time, not fooling ourselves to get over something. This poem is more direct more specific and very well written. You have really captured emotion and truth here in such a perfect way.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

malina ( F P C ) at 2007-06-17

Another great and excellent poem!!!

Ruthie ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-21

Hey sweetie pie :) how are u? good i hope. Tnx so much for the lovely comment!

u know your poetry is amazing and i love it! keep writing darlin. Stay true to yourself ok? *hugs* ruthie

JAYMA ( F P C ) at 2007-06-30

I loved it!!!!:)

willowoman ( F C ) at 2007-09-13

Great poem i know what that fills like thats my whole life

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2007-10-15

WOW. This was just amazing ! The words you spoke of were so true I found myself reading this one over just because I loved it so much.

"Let the truth haunt your mind
As a lie escapes your lips"
That is just amazing !

well done *5/5*

memories fade ( F P C ) at 2008-01-04

There's so much emotion....It explains what I tend to do a little too often..I love it!..great write..=]

makayla at 2008-02-15

Good job. :)

i cannot get u outta my head ( F C ) at 2008-02-25

I kno wat tht feels like
good poem

Hooly Wooly ( F P C ) at 2008-04-23

Lots of emotion in this! good job

XxMaybe Its LovexX ( F C D ) at 2008-05-16

Wonderful emotion
Perfectly and beautifully written
5/5

jessica at 2008-06-22

I love all the poems you write there asome

LOVE IT

Carrotgirl ( F C D ) at 2008-08-22

A poem for everyone who has been in love or infatuated with someone, nice theme not overdone skillfully written

tyme2change at 2008-09-20

I love love LOVE this poem!! im actually going through something that can relate to this 100%...Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

I love Edward Cullen ( F P C D ) at 2009-01-05

I love this one just as much as I love every one of your poems(:

Taylor Badger at 2009-01-24

Wow, just wow.
you are such an amazing write.
i loved it.