Comments - Uncontrollable Differences

Karl Wild AKA GodsGift ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-31

This happend with me and my ex girlfriend, we dated for 5 years and we were madly inlove but sometimes things just aren't meant to be. I loved the poem and the flow, the words were amazing and I could relate more then I can explain. Sometimes things are just to good I guess, kind of like this poem 5/5

.K.i.T.t.Y. ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-31

This was sweet and generally had a great flow. the middle messed up the flow a bit. i liked it though. the rhyming made it smooth. idk if it was intentional, but this sounded like romeo and juliet.

great poem.

i say 5/5!

Fire lilies ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-31

Great poem. It has a nice flow and great word choice. I really liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-01

Very good!
Great emotion
Vocabulary was nice
Loved the imagery
wonderful poem

Vanessa ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-01

Nice flow, great show of strong emtion, excellent word choice, really well written 5/5

~*I Found It All In Him*~ ( F P C ) at 2007-06-07

Wow...I liked this alot..It had so much feeling in it. Wonderful job. Very good poem.

claire ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-09

Yeah, this did sound a lot like romeo and juliet. its so sad how things can come between true lovers. beautiful poem!