Makaveli ( F C D )
at 2007-06-02
"Love can only be true when you follow your h.e.a.r.t.
if you only let your mind convince you of your love, it would be fake."
Your spot on. In some ways I think we need to learn how to balance listening to our hearts and minds when it comes to love. For a 7th grader your poetry is amazing!
Take Care :)
Joshua Grider ( F C D )
at 2007-11-11
I really love this piece..
it truely was written beautifully :)
voted and gave you a 5/5 of course
please return the favor
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