Comments - If Life Was A Dream (Collab)

End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

Hey Cindy!!

Thanks for sharing the title with me & i remember the way it struck me right at that moment, i was getting an impression that this work load has taken my will to write and i wont be able to write anymore but this title just gave that awaited punch to me and here we are again on the site together..

If life was a dream
I'd never feel alone
Pain would not exist
For you would be home

I know what you mean here and i know how this title came....though i cant change things but atleast i am part of this and thats what satisfies me.

lovely poem dear

thank you for everything

all the best and take care

chavii ( F C D ) at 2007-06-08

Wow this such heartwarming love poem , so beautiful .we all wish such love to exist in our life which makes ones live worth to live.You two really creat the best of best together :)

Take care
chavii.

Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D ) at 2007-06-08

In my opinion, Nitin and yourself write the best and most beautiful collabs on the site. You two write with such love and passion, and you express yourselves well. Again, I loved this poem, even reading it a second time still makes me smile. Excellent work. 5/5

` Liz =]

forever in love ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

Aaaah what a romatic poem. i lvoed the way you write it nicely paneed aswell. i love it. take care 5/5

Bryan ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

Tis a very good and beautiful poem,
love the flow,
u know its a perfect 5/5!!!
keep them coming!!!

Marian ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

Reading this delightful piece gives me warmth and fuzziness inside. It's 4:25 AM, and I still can't cease from smiling :). I really liked the theme which both of you portrayed in it, it was splendidly done, as always!

I'm looking forward to read more of your collab works soon. Take care.

Love,
Debbe

Ray Blue ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-09

Great poem!!!
Hi Cindy!
I liked this lines:

If life was a dream
Why would I need to sleep?
When I have you by my side
And your heart to keep

5/5!

Regards,

Ray

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-09

Love the title and the repetition of the title at the beginning of each verse.....you two are the shining stars of collab writing! Great stuff....congrats!

Andrew Morton ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-10

"If life was a dream
No tear would fall from eyes
No prayer will go unheard
True love could never die"

i love that stanza...the whole poem hit a sweet spot i hate to admit i have, i actually had to read it a few times, and every time i came across something new, true talent indeed, great work you guys!

Tara Kay ( F C D ) at 2007-06-10

Very well written, I loved the title, and every line flowed so well.
This is a remarkable piece
Great work to both of you guys
Love Tara-Kay
xx

Georgi ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-10

The rhyme in this was beautiful i really enjoyed reading this!
well done
Geo
ps. if u have time please comment my latest?
i gave this a 5
xoxxo

*♥Chelsey♥* ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-12

Life is not a dream
So there are millions who cry
Because they have no loved one
To make their tears run dry

haha I dont know why I felt like I had to rhyme when I commented but your poem made me do that!......But while reading your poem thats what I was thinking...life isn't a dream thats why so many are hurt because like you said, if it was....wouldn't we all be happy? Wouldn't this be a great world if life were the way we lived? Sad thing is no one wants to even try and make that happen!
Loved this write...great job to the both of you!
Chels

Lithium ( F P C ) at 2007-06-12

Beautiful! I love your poetry it is excellent your pieces stand out from many others and speak of a love unknown that only few experience and fewer can write about so well. xox lithium

Phil ( C ) at 2007-06-12

Great poem , I wish that life was a dream sometimes, but its not worst luck

moonlil ( F P C ) at 2007-06-12

That's absolutely excellent and so true. If life would be a dream things would be much better. Sometimes I just wish life would be that way. Great poem! I love it.

Hebe ( F P C ) at 2007-06-13

A beautiful poem with a nice flow.
I love to read it!

Thanks for commenting my poems, I really appreciate it.
Wonder what you think about my last one.

Love to read more of your poems.

Hébe

heather ( C ) at 2007-06-14

If life was a dream
You'd be here with me
Laughing, hand in hand
Smiling for all to see
........that was my fav part.
god job .

uwouldntno at 2007-06-14

Wow this is a really good poem... I hope you continue writeing you are very good

sincerely yours

uwouldntno

Tracy D Rollings ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-15

Excellent poem as always from the master, great job loved it , my favor line was: If life was a dream
No plans would be betrayed
Love will shower everywhere
No need to be afraid
I really needed them words all my life thanks Cindy , you made me feel better, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

RETARTED GHOST ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23

Cindy,
you two have done an excellent job in this piece.Such a wonderful poem you have written.The title is very well written and so is the poem.I can relate to it so much!!!How beautifully you have done this.I can quite imagine how you have done like.The ryhming was excellent.Each stanza was very well written.I over come felt like reading it again and again.The moment I finished reading this how it got stuck through my head.You two have done an excellent job!!!
WELL DONE!!!
all the best
and take care


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