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Spidonkle ( F P C ) at 2007-06-09

I'm only 14 and I can't relate but I'm happy you show great love to your son 5/5

2Beezie4U ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-24

Awwww thats a beaqutiful poem! its great how famileys are sooo close...

*Charisma* ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-03

I have your love and that never goes.

Loved that line! A very sweet heartfelt poem! I think it's so sweet you wrote about your son.

As far as your poem, it has great flow and rhyme. Just perfect!
Charisma*

InvisiblyBroken15 ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-08

Awwww this poem is so sweet....your son is so lucky to have a mom that cares about him like you do...great poem.

rohan ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-08

Lisa what can i say rather this was my first poem on the subject and i wont forget it till the last and its awesome to see people sharing love in their poems i really enjoyed it and I HOPE THAT YOU LIVE VERY VERY HAPPY WITH YOUR DARLING CHILD and ya make your love his strength . my heart still enjoys the poem . ok take care Rohan
and if you have time plz just suggest on my poems.

rohan ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-08

Lisa what can i say rather this was my first poem on the subject and i wont forget it till the last and its awesome to see people sharing love in their poems i really enjoyed it and I HOPE THAT YOU LIVE VERY VERY HAPPY WITH YOUR DARLING CHILD and ya make your love his strength . my heart still enjoys the poem . ok take care Rohan
and if you have time plz just suggest on my poems.

JaMeS ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-17

That was beautiful honestli amazing writing their its from the heart :) you should be proud

njabulo b ( F P C ) at 2007-07-23

Its a fantastic poetry, very good 5/5

Sunshine at 2007-07-29

Very beautifully penned. Loved your poem. Take care

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