Hidden Kiss ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-14
That's so sad. But I love the feeling and the depth to it, it's very good, and how it rythmes, very well done.
=]
Tara Kay ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-16
That was very good, the emotionw as pure and deep, and the imagery was great too.
well done
xxxx
you have talent
love Tara-Kay
xxxxx
Miu. ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-16
Sweet poem. Imagery was really good. Emotions were great, sad write. I specialy loved the last sentence.
Keep writing!
5/5
Vanessa ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-16
Now that is a poem that I can relate too. the word choice was simple yet effective, the emotion was deep and heartfelt, really powerful, the flow was flawless, and the message was clear. well done and keep up the great work 5/5
SlaveToTheMusic ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-16
This poem was really an enjoyable read. The word choice so simple yet so effective holding deep emotion within each word you have written. Heartfelt piece which was capturing and I'm sure so many people can relate to this. Well done ~Mel
Imsorryicantbeperfect ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-18
I like the end about you beign long gone..its true you just gotta move on..another great poem..your a great writer keep it up
Impulse ( F D )
at 2007-06-18
Awww very sad =s... I've no doubt that in the long run you'll move on and put it all behind you
Well written... and I loved the writing =)
CHOKE ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-18
Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say.
it was very into depth as well as intriguing and capturative. i wouldn't change a thing :)
5/5 love.
lynn
at 2007-06-19
Dame
that is so sad
SweetPinkPrincess
at 2007-06-19
That is so sad. It reminds me of my exboyfreind
Smilie
lovedxlost
at 2007-06-19
Youre very talented, what a beautiful (but sad) poem
SarahhJayy ( F P )
at 2007-06-19
Brilliant , Most People Like Peoms Yjay rhyme This Is Excellent
Lonelyangel
at 2007-06-19
It almost made me cry. it reminded me of my ex and how it took me so lang to get over him and how when he wanted me back i was OVER him. and i mean way over... guys are jerks.
Hebe ( F C )
at 2007-06-19
Wonderfull poem.
So sad, full deep emotions.
Great piece of writing.
Take care
skye16 ( P D )
at 2007-06-19
B-e-a-utiful... i like it alot, but i honestly hate how i can relate 5/5
DAYDAYZcupcake
at 2007-06-19
Aww i love it really emotion filled i felt as i was reading i was thinkin of someone seeing myself sitting wiping away my tears lol its a great 1 keep up the good work
Sarah Ann ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-20
Beautiful poem, The message sent is clear and loud and written very well. Keep it up!
Tara ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-20
I can totally relate! My bf cheated on me with a girl FOUR years older than us. It hurt but I moved on. I really love the flow but next time try to break it off into stanzas. Excellent. 5/5
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