Comments - You're My Only Mistake

CHOKE ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-18

Wow, that's a horrible thing to do. (whether it was done by a girl or a guy)
some people think that love doesn't mean anything, therefore they play with it in the palm of their hands and then toss it in the trash bin.
it's aweful really....
anyway 5/5.

Jonda Beth ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-18

Awww...once again it was lovely...i love depressing poems that are so pretty that you can't really be too depressed after reading it...this was one of those...
Jonda Beth

Goran Rahim ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-19

Another great poem with a sad tone, yet again you have successfuly wrote a great poem.
keep it up
a 5/5 from me as yu really deserve it...

XcrissyX ( F ) at 2007-06-23

I love this poem aswell! your goin in my fav writrers...can you read some of mine pleae and comment and tell me how to improve it??

Genna ( F C ) at 2007-06-23

This was a great poem! 5/5!

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23

Excellent, truly amazing. The flow was perfect and it was a joy to read. Very good, keep it up.

Tiffany ( C ) at 2007-06-23

Amazing is the only word that I can say for this poem.....Great Job!!! Honestly it hit me really hard!!! Excellently wrote!!

XOXOX Tiff

heather ( C ) at 2007-06-23

Its so good ! 5/5 this was my fav part i really liked your word choice .
once again very good job.
And I looked at your ghost,
looking back at the mirror...
--The movement in question
came Oh! So much clearer.
You walk far away
as tears roll down my face.
And I never will trust
-- it's my final mistake

Tigger at 2007-06-24

This was beautiful i loved it 5/5

grease at 2007-06-24

This happened to me too, thas why i understand it so well it absolutley awesome!!
I love it!! 5/5

Reshia at 2007-06-24

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!

forever in love ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-24

Your poem was awesome. but believe me it was sch a sad poem. i loved the way you have explained your feelings. aggressive. i will give you 5/5

jessica at 2007-06-25

I love this poem!! it reminds me of sumthin i went through. its awesome.

Sherri at 2007-06-25

That is good.Be my friend.

Sabree at 2007-06-25

Such agony and torment that lies within your withered ways...this poem speaks wonders and projects all of that pain. I am unsure of what to really say about it. It is not my favorite of yours, but still wonderous all the same. You are an amazing poet. I have gone through similar things with both a boy and a girl...they both shattered my dreams tore out my heart and left me an empty shell. However i did move on...mainly because of poetry. I can see that you can do the same with your poetry...that much is clear. I will give you a 4.5/5 for this poem. Keep up the good work, do not dissapoint me for i look up to your poetry highly. Someday i aspire to have the level of emotion in my poetry as you do. If you get the chance please check out some of mine...they might not be very good, but i need the critisim. Much obliged whether you do or not. Excellent poem...keep it up.

-Sabree

xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx ( F ) at 2007-07-01

Babe that was beautiful..
keep writing x

Vanessa at 2007-08-01

I can't stop reading your poems this is my third one and i'm so amazed. You truly are a wonderful writer nice sad poem. Take care, Vanessa

loversdismiss at 2007-08-15

Ohhhh!!!!!!! that was sooooooo great!! how do you do it!!! your the best writer ever!!

Sunshine Tina ( F P C ) at 2007-08-19

Wow! great poem!
I really like it!
great job!

Imma Flirt ( F ) at 2007-09-03

Wow great poem.... this is basically my life story i no longer let people get close to me ive been hurt to much by them walking away. You did a great job 5/5


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